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 Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]

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PostSubject: Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]   Wed Aug 04, 2010 7:03 pm

Basic Info

Name:
Yami Kurushimi [[Means: Darkness of damnation]]

Nickname/Alias:
Cursed Child

Age:
18

Gender:
Female

Important Family Members:
None.

Personality:
Yami grew up in difficult circumstances. Her family feared and hated her, and so did the rest of the village. Because of this , she developed an evil and mischievous character. Yami never shows her emotions and keeps always a bored expression. It is very unlikley for her to smile let alone laugh. She is very straight forward and doesn't care what others think about her. Yami hates her family and most of the villagers. She is very mature but stubborn. She is also very manipulative and tries to take advantage of everyone and every situation. Yami is intelligent and likes to lie, a lot. Most of her time she spends drawing or walking in the streets of Kirigakure when she is not busy with her Ninja work. Furthermore she can understand a person's personality with just looking at them or with a short talk. Since she became a missing nin she has closed to herself even more and kills every person who annoys her.


General Appearance

Basic looks
Yami has long blue hair which reaches until her back and blood red eyes. She is tall, skinny and pale. She usually wears a blue dress[[see pic]] but she doesn't wear hats. The dress seems uncomfortable which is not the case. It is very comfortable and was designed for combat. Moreover, the dress has in it a steel mesh which blocks any lightning attack. That means that if a lightning was to hit her the dress would absorb it and lead it through her shoes into the ground. In order for her dress to connect with her shoes, she wears tights which touch the dress.


Height:
1.75 meters

Pic:

Spoiler:
 


Weight:
62 kg

Preferred wardrobe:
--

Extra Features:
Nope.


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai:

Description:

The origin of this clan is unknown. However,there is a legend which explains how the members can transform into a Pheonix. It is said that the clan founder fell in love with a beautiful woman with long red hair. They married and had many children. One day the man watched his wife as she transformed into a red giantic Pheonix. He was buffled and shocked. The man truly loved the Pheonix-woman and decided not to say anything, despite him being disgusted. However, when he learned that his children could transform into those birds too, he killed his children and his wife. One child survived and managed to kill his father. As the man was dying he cursed his son so that his children may go all insane.

The Kurushimi clan was a wandering clan before it established in Kirigakure. Yami's ancestors, before establishing in Kirigakure, were living near volcanos and thus they developed a heat and fire resilience skin. It's members are Fire style experts and are respected and feared throughout the world. Every 200 years a child is born who is cursed and is said to destroy the whole clan. The Kurushimi clan has existed for 600 years, and therefore there were only two cursd members born so far.The first cursed child wasn't evil and never harmed anyone in any way, she died peaceful. Hence the clan members believed that this curse was just a bad joke or a misinterpretation. The second one was the leader of the clan. He was very kind to everyone and cared about his family's well being. One day he almost slaughtered his whole clan. The remaining members managed to stop him, luring him into a trap which set an end to his life. Since then the clan members decided to kill the cursed baby before it could harm anyone. However when Yami was born, the current Kirikage stopped the members from killing her since he never liked violence. He promised he would teach Yami and that if she proved capable, she would become the new Kirikage.


Physical Traits
Yami, being the cursed child, has a pheonix tattoo on her back, which is the clan symbol.

Pic:
Spoiler:
 

Ability Overview

The Kekkei Genkai of this clan grants invulnerability to every firestyle jutsu up to A rank.For Genin it's up to C, for chuunin up to B and for Jounin and Kage up to A. The members are invulnerable to fire attacks because their ancestor was a female Pheonix. Moreover, it allows the members to transform themselves into a Pheonix. Also the cursed member has absolute control over fire, meaning he can shape,create,move fire at his will. He can however not control other people's Fire techniques.

Rank and Skill Information

Village:
Kirigakure

Rank:
Jounin

Letter Rank
A

Group affiliation
None at the moment.

Specialties:

- Main:
Ninjutsu

-Sub:
Genjutsu

-Combination
--

Advanced/Secondary Skills:
Fire mastery
Above average medical knowledge.

Elemental & Jutsu Information

Elemental Affinity

Primary Element
Fire

Secondary Element
Lightning

Advanced Element
Wind

Combination
--

Jutsu

Name:
Rank:
Classification:
Element:
Requirements:
Description:


History/Rp Sample


Rp Sample:

Shikamatsu, who was across the lake, suddenly appeared next to the one who was sitting on the rock. As he was talking to him Shikamatsu turned his gaze towards the trees, right there were Harumi was hiding. Damn it! the young ANBU thought, still not moving. Shikamatsu said to the other Akatsuki member, whose name appeared to be Satoru, that two other persons were approachingh them, as well. Harumi saw a man with a sword on his back coming towards the Missing ninja and herself, although he didn't know the latter.

The newly arrived man had asked them if they were brothers or enemies, emphasizing the last one. Shikamatsu looked at him and replied We are the Akatsuki which doesn't make us twins or Enemies. Members you could say, or more like a team of destruction. A team that will fight for every bit of what we want and what we was is a fight. You and your friend underground. The young girl stared at the man with the sword, wondering if he was from another planet or something. Didn't he know that people who wore black cloaks with red clouds on them were Akatsuki members? The most dangerous organization in the whole world?

The ANBU saw Shikamatsu pulling out two shuriken throwing them at were Harumi was hiding. I expected that... she thought as she jumped off the tree, over the men heads, landing on the lake. " What a rare sight to see Akatsuki members here. And you," she said, looking at the swordsman " tell your friend to come out. Everyone knows that he is hiding under the earth." she said through her ANBU mask, which was representing a fox. Harumi's voice came out steady, hiding the fact that she was rather tense. She knew that they would soon fight, and this fight was going to end ugly.


History:


Birth arc:

Yami was born on the 7th July on 7 o;clock in the morning. This number [[777]] was considerd lucky and thus the members thought that Yami wasnt the cursed child. However the nurses spotted a strange red burning-like tattoo on Yami's back and her parents new right away that she was cursed. Suddenly her father attacked Yami in the hospital, trying to kill her. Luckily for Yami, the current Mizukage was present and managed to stop her father, saving her life. He promised that when she would get old enough he would train her. Her parents were forced to keep her and care for her.

6-9 years old:

When Yami became 6 years old the Kage started training her. Since he was a Fire user as well, she learned advanced techniques. Her father was forced to teach her the clan Jutsu which she had a natural talent for. Yami kept training every day getting better and developing her own jutsu. However jutsu was not the only thing that the Kage had taught her. He also taught her love and how to care about others. He showed her how to be kind and that it is worth loving another person . And, really, Yami became a good person always willing to help others. One day she saw a group of children her age, beating up a girl until that girl bleeded. Others were standing around, laughing. Yami didn't feel the need to help this girl. At first she pitied it but then something inside of her changed. The curse had awakened and her true evil self had come to the surface. Yami started hating those disgusting human beings and decided that some day she would put an end to their lives. Yami kept training with the Kage becoming stronger but she no longer cared for others. She just pretended to be kind and caring.

Genin:

Yami became a Genin at the age of 10, being the strongest and most intelligent from her teammates and even the other Genin. She always completed her missions no matter how small and easy they were she never complained about them. On missions she was a teamplayer but deep down she detested her teammates and everyone else. Yami kept training and developed an ability to see through other people. This means that she could understands people's personality with just looking them into the eyes or talking to them.

Chunin:

The time had come for Yami to participate in the Chuunin exams. She had heard that many Genin didn’t make it the previous year but that didn’t discourage her. She knew she was strong and that she could pass the exams even though her team mates would be a nuisance. The day for the first exam had arrived and Yami and her team entered the class room in which the written exam would be held. There were 9 questions, each one of them being more difficult than the previous one. Yami had ripped off her head and studied like a maniac for the written exam and as expected the questions were relatively easy to answer. Looking around she noticed that almost everyone had difficulties answering the questions. Even her team mates. After 30 minutes the proctor announced that it was time for the tenth question. They could choose to answer that question or to raise their hand and to leave. Everyone who would answer the question wrong would never be able to take the Chuunin exams again. Yami’s team mates chickened out and were about to raise their hands but when they saw the evil death glare Yami was giving them, they quickly lowered their hand. Half of the Genin had given up and the proctor announced to the remaining Ninja that they had passed the first round of the Chuunin exams.


The next day all the Genin who had passed the first part gathered in front of a forest known as the Forest of death. They were given scrolls, each team different ones. The half of them got the earth scroll and the other half the heaven scroll. Each team had to get the scroll they needed from an other Ninja team. Yami’s team had the earth scroll and so they were looking for a heaven scroll. In the forest they stumbled on a Suna team. A boy immediately attacked them with Suiton Jutsu and Yami, being a Katon specialist, couldn’t win against him. That is why Yami after the Chuunin exams started developing Jutsu that could beat a Suiton user, if used right. However, her team mate was a Doton user and thus could beat him. Yami took on a guy who had red hair and was a Nara. They fought hard but eventually Yami’s team mate dropped the earth scroll and they discovered that they had the same scroll. The Nara boy, whose name was Tenshin, and Yami became close friends since then, being impressed by each other. Yami’s team was finally able to get a heaven scroll, though at the cost of their lives. Yami passed the second round and continued to the finals.

During the one month that was given to them in order to practice and to learn new techniques, Yami developed some water Jutsu and perfected the use of her Phoenix form. She trained hard every day, improving rapidly.

At the final rounds, Yami was put up against a Kumo Shinobi. His main element was Fuuton and since Fuuton is naturally weak against Katon, Yami won rather easily. She was promoted to Chuunin along with some other Genin and Tenshin. Even after the Chuunin exams, Yami and Tenshin kept meeting each other, as they had formed a strong friendship. Tenshin was checking on her once in a while, and so did Yami. She purposely requested missions that required her to go to Suna, in order to see Tenshin. She deeply cared about him, since he was the first person she ever felt connected to. The first person who she could call a ‘friend’. The first person who was like her.



Jounin:

Yami passed the Jounin exams perfectly. In the last round she had to kill her 'best friend'. She knew it was just a test from the Kage to see if she was really good. When the time had come to land the final blow with which her 'best friend' would die, she stopped the attack looking up at her Kage and said: "I give up. I can not kill my best friend." of course she was lying and everything in her body was screaming for her to kill her so-called best friend. The Mizukage was impressed and promoted her to Jounin.

Missing arc:


The day had arrived to elect a new Kage since the current one was old and unable to put up a good fight. Yami had expected that she would become the new Kage. However the current kage had decided to make another Ninja Kage. It was the boy who passed along with her in the chunin exams. Yami was furious and went to the Kage's office asking why she wouldn't become Kage. He answered that the love of the boy was bigger than her's so he fit more the spot. Yami's inner darkness arose and in her anger she killed the Kage. Realizing what she did she didn't feel guilty or bad, instead she was proud of herself. Unfortunately, some Jounin saw her and tried to kill her. Yami managed to get away and since then she has been wandering along the world trying to find a purpose and a way to destroy Kirigakure. [[The rest will be RPed]]


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PostSubject: Re: Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]   Wed Aug 04, 2010 7:14 pm

Lightning

Name:Raiton • Hiraishin
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description:It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Lightning Element. After coming into physical contact with her opponent, the user will raise her arm into the air. She will then generate a bolt of electricity which will travel through her body into the body of her opponent.



Name: Raiton • Jibashiri
Rank: B
Element: Lightning
Description:Raiton • Jibashiri is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Lightning Element. After soaking her opponent with water, the user will unleash an electric current which will run along the ground towards her opponent.


Name: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Description:Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.

Name: Raiton no Yoroi ni
Rank: S
Element: Lightning
Description: Raiton no Yoroi in a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Lightning Element. After surrounding and infusing his body with the Lightning Element, Raikage will greatly increase his speed, power and reaction time. This Lightning chakra will also act as a defensive shield, being able to greatly decrease the strength of incoming attacks, like a Chidori. The increase in speed will also grant him reflexes on par with Yondaime Hokage.


Fire

Name: Katon • Endan
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows the user to emit a jet of fire from his mouth.

Name:Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name:Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Gouryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.


Name:Katon • Haisekishou
Rank:B
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Haisekishou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed handseals, the user will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when the user clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an explosion.


Name:Katon • Housenka no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element:
Description:Katon • Housenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai.



Name:Katon • Karyuu Endan
Rank:B
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.


Name:Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu
Rank:B
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Kasumi Enbu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and then proceeds to blow a large combustible mist at the target. When the mist hits flame, it will ignite in an explosion of fire.



Name: Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Basic Jutsu


Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.

Name: Explosion Tag: Activate
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user will activate an explosion tag. Normally, the tag will be placed by them, so they know where it is and can easily activate it.

Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Replacement Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

Name: Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.

Name: Kai (Release)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.

Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu (Technique of the Shadow Shuriken)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: The Ninja throws with two consecutive Shuriken at the enemy, so that one of the thrown weapons is in the shadow of the other. The aim of this technique is to draw the attention of the opponent on the first Shuriken, so that the enemy only notices the second Shuriken when it is too late for an evasive maneuver.

Name: Sō Shuriken no Jutsu (Shuriken manipulation technique)
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Description: It is a technique in which the user throws very quickly two giant shuriken on the opponent.

Genjutsu


Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu ( "Demons illusion: Technique of hell representation")
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Description: It is a technique in which one can create an illusion in which the victim has to endure images of his/her worst fear that his/her own mind produces.

Name: --
Rank: B
Element: Genjutsu
Description: This unnamed Genjutsu is a technique used by Kamira. Kamira will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying oni can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while Kamira herself chokes and kills the target.


Name: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu
Rank: D
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Kasumi Juusha no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real, the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Name: Kokohi no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Genjutsu
Desrciption: Kokohi no Jutsu is a simple Genjutsu technique which changes the appearance of a nearby object.

Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu
Rank: C
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.

Name: --
Rank: B
Element: Genjutsu
Description: This unnamed flower petal technique is a Genjutsu utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. If Kurenai becomes trapped in a Genjutsu or wants to appear to be trapped she can disperse into a shower of flower petals. With this technique these petals will fly around and consume her targets, dissolving their bodies away.

Name:
Rank: B
Element: Genjutsu
Description: This unnamed flower petal technique is a Genjutsu utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. If Kurenai comes under attack, she can use this technique to cover her escape. After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai's body will disperse into a shower of flower petals. These petals will confuse and distract her opponent while she escapes or hides.

Name:Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu
Rank: B
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Magen • Jigoku Gouka no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that causes its target to see a vision of fire. After Yoroi forms the needed handseals, a huge ball of fire will descend from the sky to envelope his target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.

Name: Magen • Jubaku Satsu
Rank: B
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Magen • Jubaku Satsu is a Genjutsu technique utilized by the Leaf Jounin Yuuhi Kurenai. After forming the needed hand seals, Kurenai will disappear and approach her target. Once near her target, a tree will grow at their feet and its branches will bind them so they can no longer move. Once the illusion makes them believe they are captured, Kurenai will appear from the tree itself and stab her target with a kunai.


Name: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu
Rank: A
Element: Genjutsu
Description: Nehan Shouja no Jutsu is a Genjutsu technique that allows the caster to place a large body of people into a unconscious state. The target can avoid the spell by forming and using the dispel skill.


Wind

Name: Fuuton • Atsugai
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After releasing his black Wind elemental from his body, Kakuzu will use the spirit to release a large wind blast.

Name: Dai Kamaitachi
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Sand ninja Temari. Named after a mythical creature, Temari uses her fan to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with her chakra. This technique is a bigger version of the normal Kamaitachi no Jutsu, having the ability to cause a great amount of cutting damage to the nearby area.

Name: Fuuton • Daitoppa
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Fuuton • Hana Chirimai
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, Fuuka will create a spinning vortex of flower petals. This vortex can engulf her target to limit their vision and then slam them into nearby objects.

Name: Kamaitachi
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Sand ninja Temari. Named after a mythical creature, Temari uses her fan to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with her chakra. When her opponent is caught in the wind, a tornado will raise them into the air and hold them with the chakra. The wind will then begin to cut the target with the sickling winds.

Name: Fuuton • Kazekiri no Jutsu
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, the ANBU member will form the needed hand seal. A large slicing wind will then be created which can cut through his opponent. This can be used to immobilize large summons.


Name: Fuuton • Tatsu no Ooshigoto
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Description: It is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. Temari will swing her fan into the air, causing the sky to grow dark and stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that will drop down on top of her target


Clan Jutsu


Name: Fenikkusu henkan
Rank: C-A
Element: Ninjutsu
Clan: Kurushimi
Description: With this jutsu the clan member is able to transform into a pheonix. In this form the user is able to use any fire jutsu which is up to his rank. Genin D-C, Chuunin D-B, Jounin D-A, Kage D-S
Genin can be a pheonix for 2 posts, due to the difficulty of this jutsu.

Name: Furaingu hinotama.
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Clan: Kurushimi
Description: The user will beat their wings and fire balls will come out of them. The user can control the balls' direction. Genin can't use this technique
Chuunin can make 1 ball.
Jounin can make 2 balls.
Kage can make 3 balls.

Weapons


Name: Yumi chakura ika.
Rank: B-A
Element: None.
Classification Arrow and Bow
Requirements: None.
Weight: (Weight of your item)
Length: (Length of your item)
Abilities of item: Yami will put her index finger on the string and pull it back. Then an arrow out of pure chakra will be formed which, when let free, will follow the opponent until it hits something. Genin can't use this Bow. Chunin only once in an RP topic. Jounin twice in an RP topic. Kage three times in an RP topic.
Description of item Appearance:

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Name: The Pheonix' tears
Rank: --
Element: --
Classification Liquid
Requirements: The user must be wounded.
Weight: 2 gramm
Length: --
Abilities of item: Yami Kurushimi owns a special liquid which is known as 'The Pheonix' tears'. These tears were handed down from her family and have a unique ability. It is said that these tears are capable of healing every wound no matter how critical it may be. It has been used only once by an ancestor of Yami's. His daughter's half body was ripped apart and desperate to save her, he threw over her almost all the tears which remade her ripped off body parts. Because of this event there are only 0,2 lt left. The Pheonix tears are being carried in a necklace which has a pheonix form.
Description of item Appearance: A transparent liquid.
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Name: Kuro-fū
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Classification Fan

Requirements: None.
Weight: 1.1 pounds
Length: 11 inches
Abilities of item: With those fans Yami can control better her wind jutsu and perform some jutsu that can only be performed with fans.
Description of item Appearance:


Medical Ninjutsu


Name: Shosen Jutsu
Rank: A
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: The Shosen Jutsu allows the user to heal wounds by focusing their own chakra to his hands. The better the user is trained, the worse wounds he can heal.

Name : Chakra no Mes (Chakra Scalpel)
Rank: A
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: It is a special Ninjutsu which Iryonin use. Typically this Jutsu is used for operations but can also be used in combats. Once the Ninja formed the necessary hand signs, he focuses his chakra into his hands. With this the user can cut the opponent’s muscles and blood vessels and then the enemy is paralyzed. The opponent can even die.

Name: Inyu Shōmetsu (阴 愈伤 灭, "Secret healing injury destruction)
Rank: A
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: Inyu Shōmetsu is a healing art with which the user can create new cells in wounds, leading to rapid healing. It is also possible in the battle to focus the healing process aimed at the body site to which the enemy with his attack targets, which reduces the damage to a minimum.

Name: Saikan Chūshutsu no Jutsu (Technique of critical illness extraction)
Rank: B
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: Saikan Chūshutsu Poison is drawn out of the body of a person with the help of chakra and water. Since the poison is extracted directly, you can examine it and thus produce an antidote.

Name: Chikatsu Saisei no Jutsu (Healing life force regeneration)
Rank: A
Element: Ninjutsu
Description: Chikatsu Saisei is an advanced medical Jutsu, which uses parts of the victim’s body to rebuild the cells in the damaged area. The greater the injury is, the longer the process. The injured person is placed in a ritual square. One Iryonin its on a corner of the square to support the chakra control while another leads the process.


• Name: U~indi kasai
• Rank: B
• Classification: Ninjutsu
• Element Katon & Fuuton.
• Requirements: Fans (optional)
• Description: Fire mixed with wind will shoot out of Yami's mouth, after the necessary handseals have been performed. With her fans she can control the fire's direction and speed, as well as it's strength.


• Name: Howaito-en
• Rank: A
• Classification:Ninjutsu.
• Element : Fire
• Requirements:None.
• Description: White flames will shoot out of Yami's mouth. These flames are incredibly hot and are able to melt/evaporate everything they pass by. This jutsu can be used only once in battle.


• Name: Faiā tatsumaki
• Rank: A
• Classification: Ninjutsu.
• Element Fire
• Requirements: Must be a member of the Kurushimi clan in order to perform this jutsu.The user must have performed Fenikkusu henkan.
• Description: Yami will beat her wings and fire tornados will appear. Yami can control the tornado's direction. Genin cant use this technique. Chuunin can make 2 tornados. Jounin can create 3 tornados. Kage can make 4.

• Name: Konchū no akumu
• Rank: C
• Classification: Genjutsu
• Element: N/A
• Requirements: The enemy has to look at the casters eyes.
• Description:When caught in this Genjutsu the enemy will see different insects crawling out of their body. (mouth, nose or even break out of their skin) The enemy can break free with pain/Kai.

• Name: Kami no keimusho
• Rank: B
• Classification: Genjutsu
• Element N/A
• Requirements: The opponent has to have long hair. The opponent has to look at the caster's hair.
• Description: The enemy's hair will wrap around his neck, suffocating him. The enemy can break free if he cuts his/her hair.

• Name: Ketsueki warai
• Rank: B
• Classification: Genjutsu
• Element N/A
• Requirements: The opponent has to be wounded and has to look at the caster's fingers.
• Description: The enemy's blood will run out of the wound and as a result the enemy will blead to death. In reality he will just faint. The enemy can break free with pain.

• Name: Wa kūki
• Rank: A
• Classification: Genjutsu
• Element N/A
• Requirements: The opponent has to look at the caster's upper body.
• Description: The enemy will find himself in a place with no air and thus die. In reality he will faint. The enemy can break free with Pain.

• Name: Kiken'na jimen
• Rank: C
• Classification: Genjutsu
• Element N/A
• Requirements: The opponent has to look at the caster's arms.
• Description: The ground around the enemy will turn into needles which will pierce him. The enemy can break free with pain.

• Name:Nemu-sōna oto
• Rank: A
• Classification: Genjutsu
• Element N/A
• Requirements: The opponent has to look at the caster's head/face.
• Description:Inside the enemy's head a sound will appear which will let them fall asleep. The enemy can only break free if another Ninja sents their own chakra into the victim's body.


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PostSubject: Re: Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]   Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:27 pm

OOooooook!

Firstly, I like the clan. Control over all fire may be the wrong words though. I can understand they have a huge amount of fire techniques which they can perform without much chakra use and such, and that's perfectly fine. Maybe just reword it quickly, as you still wouldn't be able to control an opponent's fire technique (given it's riddled with their chakra). As far as I'm concerned, even the invulnerability to fire is within reason, a clever nin should be able to work around it.

Secondly, and lastly:
Quote :
Name: Fenikkusu henkan
Rank: C-A
Element: Ninjutsu
Clan: Kurushimi
Description: With this jutsu the clan member is able to transform into a pheonix. In this form the user is a ble to use any fire jutsu which is up to his rank. Genin D-C, Chuunin D-B, Jounin D-A, Kage D-S

This needs to be an S Rank technique. We shall have no Genin or Chuunin turning into flying, fire-emitting Phoenixes. UNLESS, you describe the differences between ranks and somehow make the C rank version an acceptable talent for a genin to have.

THAT IT ALL.


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PS: The length of the personality is fine in my opinion, there's really only so much one can say about someone's personality so that a reader gets the idea, anything more is overkill. Well, with the exception of going into algebraic algorithms.

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PostSubject: Re: Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]   Thu Aug 05, 2010 2:54 pm

''Genin can be a pheonix for 2 posts, only due to the difficulty of this jutsu.''

^That's what I wrote for: Fenikkusu henkan.

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''He can however not control other people's Fire techniques.''


^That's what I wrote for the overall fire control.

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PostSubject: Re: Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]   Thu Aug 05, 2010 5:25 pm

Hm, alright.

Approved.

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PostSubject: Re: Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]   Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:45 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Yami Kurushimi [[Finished]]   Sat Aug 07, 2010 7:45 pm

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