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PostSubject: Sau-Jin [Done][Approved~Kaze]   Fri Aug 06, 2010 9:18 pm

Basic Info

Name: Sau-jin (No Last Name)

Nickname/Alias: Jin, Little Jin

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Important Family Members: Her Twin Sister

Personality: Sau-jin over all looks like she has a terrible and sour personality. The personality she displays towards others matters on who the person is and who they are to her. Most of the time, however, she is “playfully cruel”. She always says mean remarks without noticing, more or so she just speaks her mind. She is honest with everything she says, which could be a curse to her. She speaks her mind even if others do not want to listen. When angered, she becomes scary in a sense. She can also be quite temperamental, causing her decisions to be made quickly. Her emotions can easily cloud her judgment, which causes her to make irrational decisions. For instance, if someone made her pissed off, she would stop talking to them and continue to ignore them. Whatever they say, she will listen to it, but continue to ignore them. In the back of her mind, she expects people to know what she is thinking and what she needs. But since most people can not read each other’s mind, Sau-jin constantly becomes disappointed in people. Her trust in people is fragile. One mistake, than they are out. She is also quite stubborn and not easily budge able. Sau-jin does anything to get her way, even if it means for her to whine.

She does not care of what people think of her, however, in the back of her mind, people’s opinions actually matter. She is also a “sore thumb” in a crowd. She sticks out. Either it is because of how she is speaking, or how she looks or how she reacts, people can spot her quite easily. She dislikes being complicated in anything, but appreciates it inside. She will deny many things but accept things at the same time. In this sense, Sau-jin’s personality counteracts each other, making her mostly at a neutral state when deciding. She is proven to be quite unique due to her reactions to many people. At times, the girl would look stupid even if she is intelligent. Determining on a certain days, the girl can be giddy or simply “not in the mood to do anything.” Her emotions are the main key. They can be easily manipulated, and in this sense she is also quite fragile. She cries easily, but tries to cry in secret. She dislikes her being shown weaker to other people, causing her to create many masks.

In a good mood, Sau-jin can be light-hearted. She’ll joke around with people she knows well. She can easily laugh, but, she can also be easily jealous of others. At rare times she will be sympathetic and forgive the mistakes others made. She enjoys having others around her, and dislikes being alone. When alone, the girl becomes afraid and scared. She easily remembers any horrible memories. Sau-jin hides her emotions as much as possible by using words to counteract them. She does not believe in true love, however, in her heart she believes in such a fairy tale. She constantly tries to find the person she can be with forever, however is afraid the person would leave her. She doubts others quite often, but can not get herself to believe others.


General Appearance

Basic looks
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Sau-jin has fair skin, making it a little bit harder for her to tan. She is about 5’5” in height and weighs about 110 pounds. She has a longer torso and semi-long legs. Her body shape is in an hour glass shape. Her hair is a fiery red color that is pulled up into pigtails. However, if her hair was put down, it would reach all the way down to her waist. She has bangs that just hang down. Along with her bangs, she has strands of hair that curves towards her face. Her hair has a natural healthy look, it being constantly clean. Her hair shines in the light in a healthy glowing manner. Because of the care placed in her hair, it is silky at touch. For her left pigtail, she uses an orchid colored ribbon with a white fringe to tie it up. On her right, it would be tied up with a normal black ribbon but she would also wear a mini top hat on the right side of her head. The mini hat would be made out of black silk with an orange ribbon tied around it. Pinned on the hat would be a mini black crystal with four mini purple feathers sprouting out of the crystal. Each feather slightly separated from each other. She has crimson colored eyes with golden curved lines within them. She has what most people call a “natural beauty” look. Without the use of any makeup products, she looks like she wears the perfect amount of eyeliner and mascara. Because of her eyelashes being black, as well as having that eyeliner look, her crimson colored eyes stand out easily. Her lips are a light pink color yet at times it can obtain a rose-colored tint.

Sau-jin’s style is more of a Lolita look. Normally she wears a white blouse which is buttoned up, the buttons which are black in color. In the middle of the blouse would be a white fringe, the buttons going down the center. From the bottom of her breasts to her waist she would be wearing a black corset, making her posture perfectly straight. Over her blouse she wears a cream colored short sleeved jacket of some sort. The buttons are buttoned up to bottom of her breasts. The jacket has an opening around her chest, than is buttoned up one last time around the bottom of her neck. Connected to the jacket, an orchid ribbon was tied on the last button; hiding it. Her jacket would have a white fringe with a black colored edge on the fringe. On her arms would be the same cream colored sleeve. The jacket would have puffed short sleeves, once more having that same white fringe. The fringe this time would be in triangular shapes with a black dot in the middle. The sleeves also have a black ribbon around the edge of it, connected to the sleeves and the fringe. At the back of the sleeves would be a single buttoned used to button the sleeve on her upper up, somewhat above her elbow. The sleeves would come down to her hands, ending in a more edgy shape. Outlining the sleeve and the lines of the silky cloth would be a white line. She wears black gloves that fit her petite hands perfectly. Sau-jin wears a tight swampy green colored mini-skirt. From underneath the jacket she wears would be orchid colored fabric. The fabric, at the back, reaches to her mid-thigh, curving around her bottom, while in the front the silk fabric would be a triangle shape reaching out both sides. Within the fabric would be a golden line that copies the shape of the fabric. On her right side, close to her hip yet placed more towards the front, would be an orchid ribbon. The ribbon’s ends would have the same golden lines copying the shape of it. She wears black tights that go up to her mid thigh and connected to her tights would be a black frilly strap of some sort, used to keep her tights from slipping down throughout the day. A golden design could be seen at the top of her black tights. Around her feet, she would wear simple black flats with a similar mini golden design on it.

Beneath her clothing, on her back would be a seal of some sort. The seal would look like the symbol of her clan, but in a tiny version. Also, in her clothing would be hidden slits. When her wings do come out they are a milky white color with small tints of a peachy color. The wings are also made out of angel feathers, the feathers being light and allowing flight. Each wing is the length of 6.3 feet.

Height: 5’5”

Weight: 110 pounds

preferred wardrobe: In Picture/Description.

Extra Features: Wings


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai: Elemental Healing and Chakra Wings

Description: Elemental Healing- A guardian angel has the ability to use elements in a manner of healing someone. That is their specialty. Any element can be used to heal.

Physical Traits Chakra Wings

Ability Overview In Clan.


Rank and Skill Information

Village: Kumo

Rank: Jounin
Letter Rank A
Group affiliation None

Specialties:

- Main: Ninjutsu (Mostly Medical)
-Sub: Genjutsu
-Combination None

Advanced/Secondary Skills:
Better chakra control: Due to her clan, Sau-Jin has an increased ability to control her chakra. The utilization of medical techniques through elemental means permits each clan member with an extremely refined and advanced ability to control their own chakra.

Increased Speed: Through manipulation of their chakra, Shinobi can move faster than a regular person would. Utilizing her supreme chakra control and harnessing her infallible training, she has grown to have speed as one of her higher attributes. In addition, when utilizing her wings, she grows significantly in speed.

Elemental & Jutsu Information

Elemental Affinity

Primary Element Raiton, A
Secondary Element Suiton, A
Advanced Element None.
Combination None.

Jutsu

Medical
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Genjutsu
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Elemental Healing
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Suiton
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Raiton
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History/Rp Sample

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History:
;Birth Arc.
November 24th, the day a new baby girl was born. Abut nine months ago a fatal incident happened to a messenger of God. This female angel in disguise was sent by God himself to heck upon on the other Hybrids. Unlike the other hybrids that were born around in August, this angel fell in love with the human world. Why? It was imperfect. In the sense of it being imperfect, it was actually perfect within. This female angel was damned like the other angels centuries ago. Influenced by the poisons of the world, the angel began to loose her good self. In this sense, she was then raped by a mysterious man she had randomly met. When the angel became pregnant, she knew she was unable to return to the heavens. So, she stayed. The child inside of her growing scared her, and even thought of getting rid of it. But the man forced her to keep the child. And so she did. When the child was born, she had the ability of being a Guardian Angel, but, if the other hybrids were to find out that she was not born by the selected angels by the gods, she would be killed. As the child grew, soon being called Sau-jin (actual spelling being: soo jin). She was a treasure to her mother, hoping for the best that this child would bring out the truth and importance of peace. When the girl turned the age of five years old, the mother soon escaped to Kiri, trying to find safety in that village, away from Suna. In Suna many tragedies happened to her. Now with her daughter, the angel and her treasure was able to live peacefully for the next years. Jin grew up in the love of her mother and found her love for music as well. Her mother, knowing the piano, played many songs for her little Treasure. At her side, Sau-jin would sit and listen to her Mother's Piano, watching the woman's hands. She wanted to grow up just like her mother, who brought smiles to people who were in pain. To be able to help those people. Soon, Jin figured out that music was the only form emotions could be in its pure form. Her mother taught her how water was like emotions, always flowing. In this, Sau-jin was eager to learn the Water Jutsu's.

;Academy Student Arc.
At ten years old, Sau-jin entered the Academy to learn more and to make her mother proud. The person who was always by her side that guided her. The girl was the second best in her class, still making mistakes every now and then. Her mother simply smiled at her and said that she could reach the top, and so, Jin did. That day, the clouds became thicker, soon letting a downfall of rain over the land of Kiri. That day, the girl was bullied for becoming the top. She had beat a boy who's family was of a high order, the son of the Village Councils. All the girls in her class, after "school", came up to the innocent little girl and suddenly became very vicious to her. Spitting nasty words at her. Frightened, Sau-jin ran away from the scene, running in the rain until she had reached her house, to the arms of her beloved mother. The angel hugged her crying child, keeping her safe in her arms. Simply, the angel wiped away Jin's tears, cupping her child-like face to offer a smile. Soon, her mother spoke, saying, "When you are sad, Little Jin, Kiss the Rain. I will always be by your side, no matter what." With that, Jin smiled up at her mother, knowing what she had meant. She was going to continue trying her best, no matter what. But she could always depend on her mother. A year passed by and the girl continued to excel in her class, to do her best. She stayed at the top and never altered. She smiled at the ones who were being mean to her. She always came home, to her Mother's loving arms.

;Genin Arc.
Passing onto being a Genin, Sau-jin was now twelve years old. In class, she was always level headed, but outside of class or being in a teacher's presence, many learned how carefree this girl was. Her mind was always on something, sometimes she was caught wandering around, going up into the mountain side. When she was alone, Sau-jin would re-teach herself everything she had learned, also, she began to understand the way of nature itself and the many elements that exists around her. Water from the sea. The Earth. The Wind. The Sun's heat. Lightning being slightly the outcast because of the fact it must be created by a storm used by water, but also, it can create Fire. With these elements, Jin understood their necessity of being balanced. However, she was still young, and believed that this was her little secret. A secret that she could only understand. Nevertheless, Jin knew that there were more than those elements. With this pushed at the back of her head, Sau-jin was striven forward to learn more. In this consequence, she passed the exams to move up in ranks.

;Chunnin Arc.
Around 14 years old, Sau-jin became a Chunnin. Her Chunnin year was important for her, but also a damnation to her Mother. She was placed in a team with a kind Sensei, and her two other teammates always seemed to do the silliest actions. One day, on a mission with her fellow teammates, something went wrong during the time frame. Someone happened to get hit by a poisoned needle from the assassins that were sent after her group. Her inner Guardian Angel self knew what to do, and at that moment of time took of Jin's mind. Jin used the rest of her own small container of water to save a life of her friend. Her hands glowed slightly as she held the container, soon pouring it over their body. The toxins in her friend's body soon began to get pushed out of their pores. Her Sensei happened to be behind her at this time, only to become slightly shocked. Her other teammate and the injured friend was then sent back to the village so the friend could have actual medical attention. But Jin and her Sensei continued on with the mission, only to complete it successfully. Her Sensei then favored her over the rest of her students. Jin's Sensei was originally from the Lightning Country, but, came over to the Mist Country to learn. Oddly enough, her Sensei taught her how to control the element of lightning and how to use it's jutsu's. Sau-jin was then passed on to become a Jounin. When coming home after passing her exam, the maturing girl spoke to her Mother. She told her the stories of her missions, however, the Angel was caught off guard by her daughter using the Elemental Healing. She knew very well that this will be Sau-jin's Last Carnival, the last time she could ever spend with her mother.

;Jounin Arc.
Becoming a Jounin, Sau-jin was sixteen years old. She was still being guided to let the River Flow in You, to not let anything break her down. Her Sensei was still her Sensei, the female teaching Jin lightning jutsu's in secret. One day, however, an assassin was sent from her Sensei's former village. As Sau-jin was walking through the streets, she spotted her former Sensei. Smiling, the girl approached her, only to see the female to fall onto the ground dead. Behind her was a ninja covered in all back, holding a bloodied dagger in their right hand. Frightened, the female turned away immediately to head back home, wanting to comfort of her guardian. However, on that same fatal day, October 29th, the door was already opened. Running inside, Sau-jin only found a single feather with a fan underneath it. She held onto the fan and the feather, finally allowing her tears to run down her face. She clutched onto the feather as if she was holding onto her Mother's life, but soon, she simply stood up to leave the house. To leave her memories behind. All she had to do was complete her course. Then she would be set. And so, that is what she did. She went through the Jounin exams and passed. Once passing, the girl opened the fan her Mother allowed her to play with. In the back of her mind, she heard her Mother's voice, calling her, "My little Jin", "My Treasure". A note slipped out of the fan, the girl opening it to read it's contents.
Her story begins from there..


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PostSubject: Re: Sau-Jin [Done][Approved~Kaze]   Fri Aug 06, 2010 9:48 pm

Looks good so far, but just to let you know...

~Not allowed to start as S-Rank, so please remove that.

~Combination. Meaning...actually, forget that. I figure you wouldn't need it anyway.

~Advanced/Secondary Skills. Such as Chakra Control, Speed/Reflexes, Large chakra reserves(don't try, for it would be denied), ect.
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PostSubject: Re: Sau-Jin [Done][Approved~Kaze]   Fri Aug 06, 2010 10:09 pm

Mmk, thank you~
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PostSubject: Re: Sau-Jin [Done][Approved~Kaze]   Sat Aug 07, 2010 10:38 pm

Please add a description to your advanced/secondary skills.
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PostSubject: Re: Sau-Jin [Done][Approved~Kaze]   Wed Aug 18, 2010 11:46 pm

Unapproved. I just realized something. You need to add the description of every exact water and lighting jutsu you know, since some could be banned/unavailable.

Todd, I suggest you please steer clear of Sau's app. However, I do not wish to explain, as the reasons are visible. No offense, bud. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Sau-Jin [Done][Approved~Kaze]   Thu Aug 19, 2010 7:21 am

I missed those. O.o

I've got all the lightning ones in my app, I think Jin.
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PostSubject: Re: Sau-Jin [Done][Approved~Kaze]   Thu Aug 19, 2010 8:15 pm

~Approved & Moved.
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