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PostSubject: Kamoku Moucho   Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:34 am

Basic Info

Name: Moucho, Kamoku

Nickname/Alias: Kam or Ku

Age: 15

Gender:Male

Important Family Members: father, mother, 2 siblings

Personality: Kamoku has an odd sense of humor. No one can really know what he's thinking or about to do. He alway's takes the easy route to everything, even in fighting he would rather run away. He may be short, but his personality makes up for his obvious shortcomings...sometimes. He is a horrible pervert to both male and female, in which he usually pays for it.

Kam loves to joke and prank on people, though when he turns serious he lets loose on all his power. Good thing that him being serious never comes often. His favorite food is anything made from corn or wheat. His least favorite foods are turnips, sugar and anything milky. he has a habit of scanning and flicking his eyes to random areas.


General Appearance

Basic looks Kamoku is very tanned and has an H shape body. He as wry limbs and very stringy muscles. The talons on his fingers and toes are completely black and are mostly covered. His large black eyes hardly miss anything. His white hair is soft but also straw-like. It always looks like it was blown back by the suna winds. The black triangle is very prominant on his forehead.

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Height: 5'1''

Weight: 79 lbs

preferred wardrobe: He wears 2 inch grey sandals ( to look taller) with grey knee socks. He has metal shin reinforcements underneath is grey samurai pants. He then has a black and gold tail wind sash as a belt. He then wears a chain mail tank, a chinese vest with a sterling silver charm on the right side of it. On the charm there is a white feather that came from his childhood friend. (whom happened to be a secretary bird)

Over the vest, he wears a black dragon vest coat with a green and black lining. He then has a white coat with black striped cufflinks. then he had a larger white thin coat with a hood and mouth cover. He wears metal fingerless gloves with a seal carved on the back. His accesories are several metal wristbands, ankle braceletts, necklaces and earings.

Extra Features: (Are there any additional visual features we should know about?)


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai: Moucho (bird of prey)

Description: Is able to control one bird and fight alongside a Moucho. the bird is able to use chakra and jutsus. the moucho's chakra color is grey. They have bird-like talons on their hands and feet, they can also use their chakra as wings to fly, or use their bird to fly.

Physical Traits sharp eyes, strong legs for running and jumping, a black triangle pointing downward on their foreheads. they also have talons on their hands and feet.

Ability Overview chakra flying, bird manipulation, grey chakra, bird traits.

Rank and Skill Information

Village: Suna

Rank: Chunnin
Letter Rank B
Group affiliation (to be filled out later)

Specialties:

- Main: Ninjutsu
-Sub: Fuuinjutsu

Elemental & Jutsu Information

Elemental Affinity

Primary Element Fire
Secondary Element Wind

History/Rp Sample


Rp Sample:

Stone sat in her desk doing paperwork. her back stiff as a board and her eyes moving quickly from one forum to the next. Her colleagues staring at her as they talk amoung themselves. They usually didn't start their work until the Serageant came in or when the Captain snuck up on them. She didn't like that they could just lay about as if there was something right about it. Just because you can do something doesn't mean you should do it.

she finished the paperwork and wrote in her journal her completed work. Title, date, time and time spent. She placed it back in the drawer and pulled out a piece of paper with the same form of meticullousness. After inking her pen, she scribbled a few words on it and closed the drawer, getting up from her seat and walking out of the room; ignoring the lazy eyes following her strict movements.

She walked down the halls, stopping several times to salute her higher-ups or to move out of the way of librarians. Speaking of which, she had arrived in one. strutting over to the main desk, she gave the paper to one and waited silently. Avoiding loose talk, as most people did here. the librarian, disgruntled that the company refused to subdue her vocal loniness shredded the paper and gave Stone the book that the paper had described.

After thanking her and sighning in, showing that she was there and when; she walked back down the hall and repeated what she had before. Salutations and being less of a burden. Two things that she hated to the utmost of her core. No matter, she just had to continue the work until she could finally do feild work. Her main pastime.

Stone sat back down at her chair and opened up the book. it was filled with circles, runes, formulas and knowledge that her mind desperately craved. It was as if she was a large sponge, soaking up the water fromt the heavens. Though she took in little at a time, it collected in to be quite large. the cover on this worn leather book was: " Alchemy Philosiphy: a science and an art".

Taking in most of the information, in the past she was told that there was 5 elements. Earth, Fire, Water, Life, and Air. Each one has its power and each one is within another. She looked up from her book, the eyes that had remained on her looked away momentarily. Hoping she didn't see their fear, though not hiding the smell. Stone wondered which was most powerful. She thought of the air that let her jump, that brought her through the desert, slowly eroding the hard rock, directing the water in the seas, and giving dance with the great flame bracketts on the streets. Yes, once she thought about it air was ruler. We relied on it, yet took it for granted. Just like the backs of the poor that the rich lean upon; without thought, and without grattitude. "Though.." she thought. " If the air rallied against them, they would fall upon the dust like the poor they had persicuted." she smiled, continueing to read. "The alchemy of wind shall be my stepping stone to a higher goal."


History:

  • 0-5-- as a child, his family was completely normal. He had two older siblings and loving parents, though he himself was quite the oposite. He was bossy, ignorant and said no to everything. His parents were so taken aback that they thought that he shouldn't have a bird at all. Finally, after he was 3 years old they decided to give him an already grown bird to offset his personality, though that never worked out. Kam was so angry at the older bird that he ran out in the middle of the night from it into the bird pens next to the dunes. The least place the bird would look... where the baby birds were.

    He slept there all night and woke up with a secretary bird sleeping in his hair. It was so tiny that he didn't want to wake it, though as soon as he moved the bird screamed as if he was murdering it. As his parents found him, they saw an odd sight; Kamoku was being pushed around by a baby bird. he was feeding it, petting it and even becoming as quiet as possible. Anything to shut it up.

  • 5-10-- As he grew up he wanted to become a field ninja, not bird carriers that holds information. He went into the academy first with his bird always on his shoulder or in his pack that he carried. Due to his outragieous personality he was well-liked, though his bird (Which he named Azami, meaning thistle flower.) kept him in check, always telling him to keep his head down. Soon, he began to trust Azami and her suggestions were integrated into his personality.

    He flew with her for several hours a day. So much that his black hair was sun-bleached to white. He refused to eat his vitamins, his red meat and became a vegeterian so he could stay small in order to fly Azami. It had gotten so serious that his family had to reassure him that Azami would grow much larger than a regular one because Azami was going to be a feild shinobi, not a carrier. Soon, he went to be a Gennin.

  • 10-15-- As he was a gennin, his parent's words rang true. Azami was soon fully grown and still continuing to flourish. He soon concentrated on his clan's jutsus and even invented some of his own: like the phionix egg and the claw crater. Soon he became a chunnin, learning as many high-end ninjutsu and fuuinjutsu. He took Azami's suggestion so much that he never wants to be a kage, but a sealmaster. A sannin with out a care in the world.

    During the Chunnin exam, he passed the written test, the forest test and the fighting test.The last one, all he had to do was fly high and drop bombs on them. He was glad to be chunnin afterwards, all he had to do now was not die during missions.


(to clear things up, Azami is a companion, not a summon. The reason she is large is because she is a feild type companion and not a carrier. such as mail and urgent messages. Its sort of like the dog from naruto, they're not supposed to be that large but he's a feild type companion))


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PostSubject: Re: Kamoku Moucho   Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:14 am

Name: Azami
Age: 12
Weight: 20lbs
Height:3ft
Length: 7ft(head to tail) 16ft (wingspan)
gender:Female
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Personality: She is a very vindictive person and is the consience of Kamoku. Kam balances her by releiveing her stress with jokes, stupid actions and a feather brush. She is very violent when she is ignored and is deeply attached to kam. for some reason, she thinks of him as a little baby bird.


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PostSubject: Re: Kamoku Moucho   Sun Aug 15, 2010 5:36 am

Key: yellow--clan jutsu

Jutsu

Ninjutsu
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Fuuinjutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Kamoku Moucho   Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:20 am

Alrighty then. Everything looks good, BUT!

Is Azami a summon or a companion. While I believe she's a companion from what I read, it isn't very clear, and she is unnaturally large, which leads me to believe she may be a summon. 3 ft tall by 7 ft long is a bit misproportionate as well. Just saying.

Also, I assume the yellow techs are for Azami, but you may want to make that clear. Or perhaps even seperate then into their own titled spoiler(s).

Finally, as a Kenjutsu specialist, you should feel free to add in some Kenjutsu Techs, and perhaps a custom sword.

That is all.
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PostSubject: Re: Kamoku Moucho   Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:07 am

the yellow techs are for kam except for the ones that mention a partner. which is for both. above the spoilers i put yellow--clan techs. i forgot to switch kenjutsu for fuuinjutsu and also in the clan app i put that birds are the companions not summons. though i added an explenation under the history just in case.

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PostSubject: Re: Kamoku Moucho   Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:11 am

Cool, looks like I was just being ignorant then.

Alrighty APPROVED~
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