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Join date : 2010-08-24
Age : 29

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PostSubject: Alisa   Alisa EmptyTue Aug 24, 2010 8:28 am

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Basic Info

Name: Yamara, Alisa

Nickname/Alias: Mara

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Important Family Members: none

Personality: She has a split personality and has a dark side as well. Most of the times she calm and can be shy at times. She enjoys to play jokes on people and is a bit of a master mind. She loves to iceskate

If you meet her dark side, you'd regret what ever you did to make her go there. her personalty then goes sour and she is mean to people then.
General Appearance

Basic looks She has long red hair and her eyes can change colour. She hsa a scare on her right arm that goes from her shoulder to her fingers. She doesn't like to wear heaps of make up. On the back of her neck is a tatto off a moon. • Height: 168cm

Weight: 48kg

preferred wardrobe: She doesn't like to wear anything that is too tight.

Extra Features:


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai: Fire

Description: Her mother and father could also control fire, but they never taught her much about how they have been able to control fire.

Physical Traits none

Ability Overview Alisa can control fire and it is also part of her Jutsu(Death flame)


Rank and Skill Information

Village: -

Rank:
Letter Rank
Group affiliation[/i
[i]Specialties:


- Main:
-Sub:(For chuunin and up)
-Combination(Must have admin permission)

Advanced/Secondary Skills: (proficiencies, mastery….)

Elemental & Jutsu Information

Elemental Affinity

Primary Element Fire
Secondary Element (E-A, Rank being equivalent to your rank, Chuunin and up only)
Advanced Element (E-S, Rank being equivalent to your rank, Jounin and up only
Combination (Only if Clan based.)

Jutsu (If they All don't fit, put in another post)

Name: Flames of death
Rank: (Rank of your jutsu, or technique - E, D, C, B, A, S, X)
Classification: (Gen, nin fuuin…etc….)
Element:fire
Requirements:
Description: her whole body turns to fire and what ever she touches turns to fire as well. She learnt this when she was homeless and called it flames of death, not knowing what ese to call it.

History/Rp Sample


Rp Sample: Alisa walked up to the gate. *I've got to do this... I've got to do this* She opened the gates and enroled her self as a ninja.
Alisa sat on the ground *Why did I do this? I'm not cut out to be a ninja* She looked up in to the starts and closed her eye, *oh well, it's a bit to late to change everything now.*

History:
Alisa was a born traveler. her parnets went missing when she was seven, so she learnt to survive on her own. At one stage of her life she changed her name to Mara, because she couldn't trust the people she lived with at the time.


Last edited by Alisa on Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:27 am; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyTue Aug 24, 2010 6:18 pm

The bloodline information and rank and skill information still need to be filled out.

If I'm jumping the gun because this isn't finished. Please add a Work in Progress caption to the title.
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Location : Mojavi Desert, Chillen.

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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyTue Aug 24, 2010 7:04 pm

Are you done?

And are you Dawnpaw?
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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyWed Aug 25, 2010 8:14 am

no iam not done
and no i am not Dawnpaw
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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyWed Aug 25, 2010 8:15 am

Kay just checking.
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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyWed Aug 25, 2010 8:31 am

is there anything else important that i have missed???
so i know what to edit Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyWed Aug 25, 2010 9:13 am

https://narutodivinity.darkbb.com/missing-ninja-f82/yami-kurushimi-finished-t259.htm
Guess this means you probably have to change your KKG, as she can control fire as well. However, you may join Yami's clan, with her permission.
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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyWed Aug 25, 2010 11:47 am

You didnt even do your rank and specialties.
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PostSubject: Re: Alisa   Alisa EmptyWed Aug 25, 2010 3:19 pm

Not only is it not fully filled out, as Null said, but we require at least a full paragraph for a genin History.

Additionally, your KKG is very similar to Yami's, not to mention the fact that you need to describe the differences in the technique for each individual rank of it. If you can turn your body to flame and ignite anything you want at D rank, I'd have to say it's over-powered, that and I couldn't fathom what the technique could do at A, S or even SS rank (note that we have no X rank, SS is the equivalent here).
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