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PostSubject: Fell Karasu   Sun Sep 12, 2010 6:33 pm

Basic Info

Name: Karasu Ryataki

Nickname/Alias: Fell

Age: 21

Gender: Male
Important Family Members:
-Karasu Clan

Personality:

Fell is a generally mild person, quiet and more of an enigma, to his allies and enemies the same. He will stand back in the corner giving people the stare, but yet having a sense of control and understanding of the situation. Though cool and calm the Karasu member is one to analyze his surroundings and understanding
What it will take for him to have the edge at all points.


Though quiet, Fell is no where near what can be defined as shy. When in a comfort zone, he will be fully of witty retorts and remarks that will be designed to antagonize his opponent confusing them beyond sanity. His comfort zones consist, of tense moments and high stress situations, giving him an advantage over others who tend to get in over their heads and over stressed. Along with his interesting battle personality, Fell has a policy of training to extremes but not to the point in which he is unable to perform at a decent level, even with the hard training Fell has been able to maintain his cold sarcastic sense of humor.

The Akastuki’s member has two different levels of relationships with people that can actually be seen. The first of which is a somewhat professional level, in which he really only allows the needed emotions to get involved and that’s all. Fell will treat those who he hold a professional relationship in a manner that seems to appear as almost a form of contempt. Cold and unfeeling is all that those who mean nothing more than tools to him will see. While with people that are close to Fell, they will perhaps see how he actually cares for his companions wishes to see them succeed. Those who open up to Fell, will sometimes reach the point of him actually, becoming attached or even a strange emotion for him, attracted to them.

Fell seems to display him self as an enigma, whether it is intentional or not; Hiding his past in the shadows showing his emotions in dark and cold ways. Everyonce in awhile Fell will find someone worth letting into his life and allow them to see truly his world.



General Appearance

Basic looks

Fell’s most common and clan based feature would be his blackish brown hair which sits on his head in a messy fashion, contrary to his rather neat attire of clothing. His eye’s are a deep sky blue which can be used to spot him out from all the other red eyed members of his clan, the right side of his face also contains three vertical scars that stretch the whole length of his face.

His physic itself has a rather lanky build to it, but after years of hard work his body has built up a large muscle mass. His arms have a full toned look and are equally toned. His lower body has been built up, to support his upper strength at a decent and healthy level. Through natural development Fell has gain a fully muscular and functional body.

Fell, sports a large amount of markings on his person, the first one someone would notice would be the horizontal blue rectangular across the center of his face. The mark itself is made of a blue ink and is set in place with a sealing jutsu making it impossible for anyone but the clan elders to remove, which is unfortunate for Fell, as the location represents his high power level, the blue color represents his disgrace to the clan and the single mark represents his failure to remain fully loyal to his village. The other point of interest in his markings would be the Karaus clan symbol, a full Crow with it’s feathers being flailed around in an elegant manner, representing his membership to the 1st dynasty of the current Karasu Clan. In truth his symbol remains on Fell’s arm by his own wishes, not to show respect to his clan but as evidence of what he truly is capable of.

The Akastuki member has two sets of clothing that he will commonly wear, the first being his akastuki robe, common to all members with its black background and scatter red cloud décor, Fell only wears this when operating as a full member of Akastuki and wanting others to know it. The other set would be his common clothing. They consist of a thin black shirt, with a white undershirt, loose black pant’s that allow the wearer to move rather quickly, Finally a black bangle can be found on his right arm and white bandages on the opposite arm, the purpose of these is simply for emergency and some jutsus.

Height: 6ft

Weight: 150lb


Extra Features:
-clan markings


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai: Karasu – Doujustu mastery

Description: A dark clan with mysterious chakra, they tend to keep to the selfs eliminating all that oppose their ways. The caln themselves will normally keep confined to the cloud village leaving for only for missions assigned to them. Their powers are rather unknown throughout the village.
Clan Characteristics :

-physical aging halts at the age of 21 due to the influence of the chakra, they have no regeneration abilities, meaning they can be killed by normal means.

-The Chakra effects on them can often leave users with twisted mentalities.

- Due to Training and ranks with in the clan, members will often have red markings along their cheeks the meaning is only known to the members.

-black hair and red eyes are the norm with in the Karasu clan.


Physical Traits
-black hair and red eyes are the norm with in the Karasu clan.)

Ability Overview
-Black charka manipulation
-Doujutsu, allows expand vision and sight activated charka wave.
-Demi-crow form
-Devour; a gift unique to Fell, it allows him to devour the chakra of an individual and develop his kkg even more with their chakra adding to his capabilities, can only be used on one who is willing (Most chakra can be devoured) Dead, (teks the remaining chakra in their body) or unconscious (Only a small amount as they have will power to resis). This ability normally is not fatal towards the target. As this happens, the list will updated.

Rank and Skill Information

Village:None, formely, Kumo
Rank: Akatsuki
Letter RankA
Group affiliationAkatsuki

Specialties:
- Main: Pupperty
-Sub: Ninjutsu
-CombinationN/a

Advanced/Secondary Skills:

Elemental & Jutsu Information

Elemental Affinity

Primary Element Earth
Secondary Element Water
Advanced Element Dark chakra
Combination N/a

Jutsu
Will have their own topic


History/Rp Sample


Rp Sample:
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History:

Early Life

A young child was born into the Karasu clan at troubled times; the clan itself was warring for power; it had been divided up into six dynasties based upon the six different lines of rulers. The child had been born into the first Dynasty, the one that the clan founder, Karasu had belonged to and as such was expected to become a symbol of greatness. If only it had been so simple, the child, Ryataki, had been pushed to his limits since the moment he began crawling. Crawling of course was not enough, he was pushed to walk, speak, and perform hand signs, anything that it would take to make him the next leader of the Karasu Clan. By the age of eight, Ryataki had proven himself to be a power full member of the clan, and perhaps the strongest of his generation.

Time as a Genin:

After his graduation, which to contempt of the other clan mates was at the age of Ten, Ryataki began to act as a ninja and warrior for the village hidden in the clouds. At First he was sent out on simple D-rank missions, finding lost items, escorting others across bridges. Through persistence, Ryatki was able to make an impression on hiss peers, but not so much his clansmen. There was once a point in time, where they considered having the child wait awhile to participate in the up coming Chuunin exams. The boy who had been bread on hard work, was determined to show them different, and disappeared from the village for 3 days and nights. With in this time, the child had found and beaten a large lizard like monster on the outer limits of the village, during this time his eye’s had began to change showing signs of the Doujutsu. Seeing a chance to exploit this, the members of the 3rd and 4th dynasty pushed the clans’ approval of sending Ryataki to the chuunin exams.

Taking a Test of wills:

The Chuunin exams were being held at the distant village of hidden rain. After the week of traveling by day and training by night, they reached the village of looming towers. The Karasu heir was mystified by the industrial wonder at first, site they had a full order checking and keeping in check every person inside and outside. Within days of arriving the first of the exams had begun, it was as usual a written test. The idea was relatively simple, six fake genin had been spread about the room, each with a different set of answers, those who passed the test were the ones who managed to get at least one set of answers per team without being caught, The use of his partial doujutsu, allowed to view a large amount of the papers with ease. The next phase, took place in three connect village, in which fifteen head bands were stored, the teams had to find three scrolls, and use the jutsu in side to track down a head band, that could possibly be held by another team. Once gaining the head band the team had to reach the upper most district of the city, in which the final round was to be held.

The child, was set to face off against another member of his clan, the battle it’s self was long and drawn out; Physical attacks were Ryataki’s only option as his ninjutsu was easily torn apart, and his Clan based chakra had no effect on a fellow clansmen’s body. In a last ditch effort he activated his doujustu, the over whelming bend up force was unleashed as one quick blow of chakra fire, that physically caused the portion of the tower that Ryataki was located in to fall. The damage done to his body was minor thanks to all the precautions taken around the village. His achievement had sent the child into he chuunin ranks and earned him a new nick name, “Fell”.

A New Heir, Chuunin:

Fell, as a chuunin did not do much as a ninja for the most part, he acted as a guard, defense against acts of aggression. His problems during that time rooted from the existents of violence between the heirs of the six dynasties of his family, the battles were small and did not disturb the village itself until an inner Dynasty battle took place. During this fight, the current leader, Fell’s cousin was killed, leaving the spot up for the grab. The other Dynasties thought they would finally overtake the clan, but it was a mistake, as Fell born on sweat and blood took over and by use of his skills managed to reunites the 1st dynasty in to an unstable union but a power house none the less. This union marked the end of the first, Dynasty war and the start of Fell’s leader ship. With his new accomplishment, the chuunin was asked to take a hirer seat within the village, this was also a reward of sorts for ending an inter-clan war, Fell was given the title of Jounin.

Jounin, A Clans’ worth of pain:

The new found peace last a mere year, as towards the coming of Fell’s eighteenth birth day, the 6th dynasty of the clan was almost consigned to oblivion from a raiding village hoping to weaken the Cloud village by weakening the Karasu clan. Unfortunately with the fall of one line of the clan’s blood, the remaining members increased with power and say, increasing the feuds and impatient for change and action. In a last hope some younger members of the clan decided to assassinate the young clan leader.

The attack had been rather foolish consider that, the younger members had never had a chance to see the use of their great clan’s doujutsu and so were quickly dispatched of. Enraged, Rya allowed his twisted chakra to over take his emotions, leader to a quick death of the leader of the 3rd dynasty one of the coordinators of the attempt. In the end Fell was no match for an army of seasoned Veterans, and as a result was captured and imprisoned, on the act of treachery to his clan and village.

Escaping, rebirth to things once old:

After a month, the raikage had order the transfer of Fell to the village allowing him to be under full control of the cloud village. Despite protests he was eventually removed from his cell and given custody to the well armored anbu corps waiting to haul him away to certain doom, his way with people would not save him here, but a whim could. In a last minute effort Fell unleashed all his stored chakra in the form of his clan’s cursed Chakra. Untrained in the art of maintaining such a power form, Fell was only able to sprout crow like wings and sparsely injured the guards.

The Freedom only looked as if it would last a few hours, when the ninja collapsed his body beaten and torn from the over use of his natural abilities, but he couldn’t stop moving; It was as if a conviction of pain and irony forced him to live on to show his clan what the world could and would be. Despite his resolve the word stop, his heart nearly gave out in the middle of a barren land. By Chance or perhaps not a traveler picked fell up and transported him miles away from his home. Upon waking up Fell found his self in the towered city that mystified him all those years a go, the man had disappeared but different presences lingered. With a burning Resolve, Fell joined the remnants of Akastuki, ready to shift the world into shock and has spent the last year hidden in the shadows, what his training and new extent of his power is unknown to himself. The Karasu heir had set himself in route back towards Rain, preparing to find more to support his cause.


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PostSubject: Re: Fell Karasu   Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:23 pm

...bump... seriously...
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PostSubject: Re: Fell Karasu   Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:18 pm

Does the dark chakra allow you to absorb their abilities?

I simply noticed that it said the list will be updated as chakra is devoured. I'm simply concerned over what exactly it does before I go approving it.

And we didn't take our time because we don't like you... We took our time because you're the site admin, jeez.

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PostSubject: Re: Fell Karasu   Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:46 pm

Second of all in no way can I absorb their abilities, the chakra taken will effect how my kkg, grows/changes, meanin ghte most that would happen is it would cause the chakra to take on a slightly different property, ex. a strong water has their chakra devoured, the black chakra becomes more fluid like but less in strength. This is only affected by chakra not kkg, unless they have a unique chakra, then something will be worked out.*Basically it causes the kkg to adapt to the chakra taken in, and if it varies to much it won't expand/the other abilites are dropped.* It simply adds a changing versatility to the kkg.

And I grew bored of "bump for love" I apologize if anyone was offended.
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PostSubject: Re: Fell Karasu   Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:43 pm

Lol, I don't think anyone got offended.

And thank you, it makes more sense after you've now explained it.

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