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 Mercury Senju [Finished]

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PostSubject: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Thu Sep 23, 2010 6:00 pm

Basic Info

Name: Mercury Senju


Age: 17

Gender: Male
Important Family Members: Mother and Father both deceased.

Personality: Having been born an orphan Mercury often finds it hard to find a balance when dealing with people. He has a strong dislike for people in general but maintains his efforts to try and open up to them. He understands what a warm disposition feels like having received kindness before but finds that most people lack genuine kindness. He often seeks to find a peaceful solution to a problem rather than fight. That however, by no means indicates his lack of ability and skill in battle. More of a book worm at times he jumps at any opportunity to read up on any and all new jutsu. A logic by nature he feels deeply that people can be friends and yet strangers at the same time and vice versa. Never placing much value on many people he simply exists.

General Appearance

Basic looks Mercury is a young man with sharp features and a slender athletic build. He stands at the average male height but appears somehow fraile at first glance. He wears typical shinobi pants with two toe footing shoes that are customary of the style of the shinobi he's used to. A serpantine dragon tattoo is branded on his forearm since before he could even form words. The mark was made with a special kind of ink. When he focuses his chakra on nights with full moons the tattoo begins to glow a erie blue hue. He's also typically seen wearing a white V neck shirt made in his home village of konoha and a light over shirt that he wears open as well as his forehead protector wrapped around his left bicept. Often times his clothes appear slightly baggy with a splash of style. Wide brimmed hats also find their way to Mercury's head at times. His hair always appears as though he just rolled out of the bed yet seems to fall in place when he runs his hands through his hair as if he's annoyed. He constantly wears a dark reverse glass visor over his eyes that prevent blindness due to brightness and a face mask when on duty. The mask filters the air of the area around him to maximize oxygen and keeps air based poisons at bay.

• Weight: 140lbs


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai: Senju (Thousand Arms) of the Forest

• Description: The Senju of the Forest were one of the founding clans of Konoha. Under Senju Hashirama, they allied with other clans to establish the Fire Country's ninja village. Once founded, Hashirama became the first Hokage of the Hidden Leaf and assisted in the physical creation of the village using his Mokuton bloodline ability. With Mokuton, the Senju are said to be one with the land and are able to freely create and manipulate the wood element. There is no established clan anymore, and those with the bloodline are few and far between. However, the history of Konoha’s first clan is still firmly set in stone.

• Physical Traits : None

• Genin (D-rank technique)- This is the “awakened” level of the bloodline. It’s abilities of manipulation and creation are quite limited. When already in their element and adding on to it, the manipulation and creation is considerably better. Uses of Mokuton at this level include tripping people with small roots, make very small and sharp root spikes stick up (like a nail), and causing thick vines to sprout from EXISTING trees in order bind their opponent.

Chuunin (C-rank technique)- With this level, the user is considered to be at the advanced level of manipulation and creation. Their manipulations are strong, their creations are large. At the level, the benefit of Mokuton becomes VERY apparent to anyone watching. Uses of Mokuton at this level include summoning a useable solid wooden weapon from the ground or one much bigger and stronger from an existing tree, form solid walls and doors of wood, create small weak houses, summon large chunks of wood to erupt from the ground and strike the opponent, summon binding wooden tendrils from the ground, create bridges, create small trees, cause existing trees to get much bigger, etc.

Jounin (B-rank technique)- With this level of Mokuton, the user is considered to be an expert in the use of Mokuton. Their manipulations and creations are truly noteworthy by ANY ninja. Uses of Mokuton at this level include forming complex wooden structures, raise sharp wooden spikes from the ground, hand, or existing trees to impale the oppenent, make major alterations to the land, cause earthquakes, bring trees to “life”, create abnormally strong physical barriers from wood, etc.

High Jounin (A-rank technique)- With this level of Mokuton, the user is consider to be a master in the use of Mokuton. Their manipulations and creations are nothing short of powerful and awe-inspiring. Uses of Mokuton at this level include forming elaborate wooden structures, create small forests, create wooden villages, form a strong barrier around a target and crush them, create trees as big as mountains… then bring said tree to life, etc.

Kage-level (S-rank technique)- Aside from the First Hokage, this level of manipulation has never been seen. I mean… you saw the stuff he was doing with it, so you know how powerful it is. Basically, at this level a person could raise a massive jungle, bring it to life, make it bust up an entire village or large non-ninja city, and then cause any evidence to go away without a trace. And… I don’t think that’s much of an exaggeration.


Rank and Skill Information

Village: Konoha

• Rank: ANBU Captain
•Letter Rank: A
•Group affiliation: None

• Specialties: (Ninjutsu, FuuinJutsu
- Main: Ninjutsu
-Sub: Fuuin Jutsu

-Combination:

• Advanced/Secondary Skills:

Elemental & Jutsu Information

Elemental Affinity: Doton/Suiton

• Primary Element : Doton
• Secondary Element Suiton
• Advanced Element :
• Combination: Mokuton

Jutsu (If they All don't fit, put in another post)

Bloodline: Mokuton

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Rp Sample and History:


Mercury, now a ANBU Captain remembers his years.

Mercury was born in Konoha and taken away at birth by what he knew to be a farmer and his wife in the area of sekigahara. His father kept in close contact with konoha and would travel there twice a year for what he called "catch up time". He lived peacefully until the day the battle of sekigahara began and his father was called upon to fight and was killed. A unknown shinobi from the land of mibu found him in the chaos and took him to safety eventually dropping him off in Konoha. He was raised in the arts of shinobi hoping to one day become one of the best shinobi the world has ever seen.

AS/Genin Arc

Given Mercury's natural abilities he excelled and during his Genin training. He remembered one time in particular.

Mercury endured harsh training in order to hone his skills as a shinobi. One of his trainers looked down on him as he attempted to understand the ways of shinobi. Remembering, he looks up at his sensei and speaks Sensei? Child, i've told you time and again to call me by my name. Ryutachi. Now What is it? I'm ready for my test.

Mercury watches as Ryutachi rises and grins with a nod. BEGIN! He jumps to his feet attempting to swing a kunai at Ryutachi's midsection. Ryu easily evades the attack and kicks him in the solarplexes knocking the wind out of him for a second as he drops to one knee. Darnit! In a rage Mercury rushes towards ryu again as ryu easily dodges every attempt on him before catching him offguard with a submission move. Do you give up? Mercury sulking. Yes i surrender. Ryu pats him on the head and grins saying these words. If you don't control yourself and your anger you will never become a true shinobi....

Merc sitting down also recalls how his kekkei genkai was first awakened after the rank of Genin. He was in a secluded training area outside of the typical suna area training with his sensei in a wooded forest. While leaving the forest after training headed back to the village something happened.

Don't take it so hard. I'm only tough on you because i believe you have alot of potential and i want to see you fulfill that potential. Merc looks up at him with a slight grin and gets ready to speak as a noise is heard behind him. Ryu pushes him to the ground. MOVE! As he hits the ground a flurry of senbon strike the tree he was just standing in front of. Completely off guard his eyes dance around looking for his attacker as Ryu's hand stretches out in front of him. Get behind me. Merc getting up frantically attempts to move forward as a figure appears in front of them both wearing a unknown headband on his head. The shinobi stands 6' tall with a spear on his back with intricate design on it. All of these details feed into Mercury's eyes just as something catches his eyes. Ta...ta...tattoo!?!?!?! He looks completely confused as he notices the exact same tattoo on the unknown shinobi's arm that's on Mercs own arm except black instead of white. Ryu, who's already in a ready stance releases a intimidating wave of chakra causing zen to step back in shock as this being the first time he'd seen Ryu like this. What do you want?! And who are you?!

The shinobi speaks with a chilling voice It doesn't matter who i am, but i'm here for the boy. I'm only going to ask once before i have to TAKE him by force. The uchiha child. As he speaks he takes out his spear gripping it in one hand. Beginning to feel the thrill of a worthy fight Ryu forms a few katas as the shinobi gets in a defensive stance kage bushin no jutsu!. Two exact copies of Ryu appear and rush Merc through the forest towards the village. Being carried he yells out No! I want to stay! Let me go!. Mercury's yells are ignored by the obidient bushin as Ryu squares off with the shinobi. The shinobi looks at ryu with a sigh You do know he can't hide don't you? We'll find him no matter where he goes. Ryu cracks his neck and begins to circle the enemy That may be so, but you'll have to get through me first.

The tension in the air continues as the enemy grins then instantaneously rushes at Ryu with a forward thrust of his spear. Ryu, barely evades the thrust as he sidesteps and pivots on one foot bringing his other leg around for a roundhouse to the enemies head as he ducks beneath the kick. As the kick misses the enemy reaches behind his back grasping a kunai pulling the spear in his right hand back a bit swings his kunai at the exposed Ryu stabbing his across the stomach. Ryu bursts into a cloud of smoke and a wooden log as the enemy grins Not bad.

The enemy turns around looking for Ryu amongst the wooded area not daring to move from his spot in full defensive posture. Moments later a swirling sound can be heard in the air as the enemy turns quickly to see a large shuriken shuriken made of wood flying towards him. Spinning his spear to deflect the projectile he makes contact with the shuriken only for it to splinter off into a large amount of wooden poisonous senbon flying in every direction. What?! At such a close range the enemy is hit with a few of the senbon as Ryu appears a distance away grinning. You've been poisoned by a toxin found in the land of wind. This toxin will attack your nervous system and your respitory system. Though it's not fatal right now, it'll definitely hinder you greatly in this fight. Now tell me! What do you want with Mercury?!

The enemy makes no sound as he bursts into a cloud of smoke leaving a large wooden piece where he once stood. Oh no!. Looking around cautiously Ryu steps forward as the enemy appears behind him laughing. You're very skilled with alot of tricks up your sleeve i see. I'll leave the boy for the moment but know this, others will come soon enough. Train him well, otherwise he won't be much fun. Stepping back Ryu glares at the enemy What the hell are you talking about!?. The enemy makes a sigh I suppose i can tell you this much. An order has been issued to bring the child to a certain person. I thought he was hiding his strength initially so i attacked. Now, however i realize that he's got a long way to go yet. I bet he hasn't even awakened his kekkei genkai yet. I want to fight him when he's stronger so i'm leaving him alone for the moment

The enemy forms a kata and begins to fade into the wind leaving these words Others won't have as much honor as i do but remember my name. It's Gilgimesh Ryohu and next time we meet. You die. Ryu stands on guard listening to every word of Gilgimesh as he vanishes from the area with all signs of his chakra gone and then thinks for a second. Mercury.....can't be an Senju...can he?


Chuunin Arc


Mercury participated in the chuunin exams and passed.

As Merc walks down the street he approaches what used to be the uchiha area of konoha only to find it abandoned with noone living there. He looks back at one of the uchiha behind him.

What happened here?

Don't worry about it. Just keep moving. He pushes Merc as he speaks these words.

He walks past the abandoned houses and is escorted to a house that looked no different than any of the others. He's escorted downstairs through a dark tunnel finally arriving to a torch lit room where 5 people sat with robes covering their heads.

One of the hooded men rise and reveal himself to be Ryutachi. Mercury takes a step back.

Ryu?! What the hell is going on?!

Ryu raises a hand silencing him.

Everything is going to be alright. Step forward and speak to the Grand Master.

Mercury looks at Ryu then finally proceeds forward as the two uchiha that brought him there remain at the entrance. He walks to the front as a voice comes from under one of the hoods and finally pulls back.

Mercury looks on as the person reveals himself to be a very old man clearly weakened by the years. The old man finally opens his eyes causing him to step back in shock.

You're.....blind!

The old man reveals eyes turned pale as the old man laughs loudly.

Yes, i'm blind. You're probably wondering how that came to be. Well i am a member of the uchiha. The grand master to be exact.

Merc looks back to Ryu then to the old man in amazement.

Grand Master? What are you talking about?

The old man continues.

I'm sure you've noticed some of the benefits of the senju blood that runs through your veins. If you don't, you will by the time we're done.You will be able to create life itself.

Merc mouth's the words to himself.

Create life? How?

You can create life through your kekkek genkai. The reason i tell you this now is for me to know but you'll know in time. Just stay alive long enough to find out...

Mercury thinks hard.

So you dragged me here to tell me nothing? Why?!

The old man's lips curl into a smile.

You're just like him. I needed to see where you're resolve was. I don't have much time left to live and wanted to be sure you had no unfounded thirst for power. As a gift to your father i've brought you here and will give the order for you to be trained by an uchiha.

My...father?! You knew my parents?!

Yes but i can't speak of him. Just know he was a great man.

Raising his hand the old man gestures for Mercury to be taken away.

These shinobi will take you into the wilderness and train you for a while before returning you to your village of Yuki. As he turns his head to look back the world around him begins to spin and grow darker.

What's happening?!

When you wake up you'll be out of konoha.

Mercury can't even see the other remaining ones sitting in the room as they remained hooded. He simply goes unconscious hearing the talk as he fades.

Ryu! Be sure to give this to him when the time is right.

As he awakened he found out the truth about his parents from Ryu as he found himself in Suna. His mother was of the Senju clan and his father was of the Mibu clan. They both fled their villages to try to live in peace from the warring lands. They were caught in the middle of a battle and killed as a result. After hearing the truth Mercury resolved to get stronger to kill those responsible for his loss of his parents. He proceeded to carry out mission after mission becoming well known in the land of suna before getting recognition enough to rank up.

Special Jounin Arc

Upon gaining the rank of Anbu Captain Mercury continued to perform various dangerous missions. The missions themselves are all deemed classified but included but weren't limited to assassinations, intel gathering, and defending kages. He'd worked hard and were given young genin to train and mentor making a few of them greatly learn in order to give them purpose in life. Although he was born an senju he wasn't raised as one but he mastered his mokuton abilities fully just the same bringing him to his current situation.

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PostSubject: Re: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:21 am

Doton (Earth)

Doton, or Earth Element, takes the form of soil and mud based attacks. These can be walls made from mud or the ninja maneuvering himself below ground to attack his opponent from below. The mountains, caves, and gardens are examples of Earth manifestations

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PostSubject: Re: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:22 am

Fuuin Jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Sun Sep 26, 2010 12:50 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:49 pm

Fuinjutsu is it's own specialty. I'm under the impression you can't have this Elemental Ninjutsu AND genjutsu.

It would be allowed if you only had up to C rank techs in Fuin though. Or Ninjutsu and Genjutsu. I just said Fuin because it seems to be your lowest ranking spec so far.

This will probably change following the new point system and so on, so hang in there. But that's the only problem I see thus far.

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PostSubject: Re: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:52 pm

Zenaku wrote:
Fuuin Jutsu

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PostSubject: Re: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:53 pm

Removed genjutsu past rank C
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PostSubject: Re: Mercury Senju [Finished]   Sun Sep 26, 2010 4:54 pm

That works.

This is now APPROVED and soon to be MOVED.

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