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PostSubject: Arael Rokusho   Tue Sep 28, 2010 10:01 pm

Basic Info

Name: Arael Rokusho
-Nickname/Alias: "Onigami"
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 175 Lbs.
Personality: Named after the angel known as Arael or also known as the Vision of God, he was rightfully named after the activation of his bloodline was known by his parents. Originally naming him with a bland name such as Haseo. After being renamed it would seem his whole set of characteristics were changed to fit his name and title. Taking in the love of fine arts, such as Music, Theatre and Literature, especially poetry. He has taken in a very delicate persona, tending to the true beauty’s of life. But along with his name being that of a servant of God, he has taken in the qualities of his families beliefs. To See Life, he has been gifted with the Vision of God. To Give Life, a purpose that has lead into his stylized fighting in the Medical field. Because of his blood, he has designed his life to be a Martyr a life meant to serve and aid others without a care for his own well being. With such a life being lead many couldn’t see that he would live to be strong, yet he has sworn to prove to those whom observe that nothing can stop him from reaching what he sets his mind to.

Elegance runs through this orphans blood, stronger than the great gift of his name. His loves for Art, Music, Theatre and Literature are die hard habits. Normally seen reading a book when ever not engaging in battle, he will spend his time noticing the littlest details in nature as if observing a portrait painted by an up and coming artist. He’s proven time and time again, that even with the ugliest of subjects someone can make it beautiful, it all depends on the person’s point of view of observation. Because of this belief he believes anything that lives is considered beautiful but even in death there is beauty, just to a littler extent. He’s seen carrying a flute around, attempting to learn it bit by bit but as he practices he understands that only in time can he master something so elegant as Music. Along with Music as a passion he’s also dabbled within the art of Literature, becoming a writer also takes time, originally working on a book of short poems he is also writing a novel based loosely around a Prince of Myths.

Many would think the loss of his parents would leave him empty inside or broken within the mental state. But they are far from correct. He has taken it as a form of fate, that neither they nor he could avoid, but would simply need to learn from the cruel twist this God has played upon him. He understands that with life comes death, it’s part of the natural path that they all must follow. But death can be stopped only so many times, someone whom has the ability to stop death isn’t immortal but merely a messenger of God, saying “You get another chance,”. Being of the Onigami blood, he is one of those Messengers of God, being able To Give Life and allow for another chance at it is something that he strives to continue within his own natural life.

The soul of Arael has many faces, and because of this he is known as the Vision of God, so complex within it’s goals that only a fool would attempt to do such things. To become a God, to control such entities as Life and Death, foolish admirations of the so called Strong. When in all regards, Arael and his blood are the closest things to God’s that have ever walked on this earth. With little respect for the cursed and wretched Sharingan of the Uchiha family, they pride themselves in their ability to see through Gen Jutsu and break down movements within Taijutsu styles, they call themselves Gods’. When really the blood of which they parted from are far closer to Gods’. The Hyuuga clan h has obtained respect through, originally not fully understanding the Byakugan, during his travels in Fire he ran into an older boy known as Ichijin that showed him many flaws within his own ways. Because of this meeting, he would understand the Byakugan and how it worked, he would allow the Hyuuga their pride to an extent, but only few of them could ever be called a God amongst mortals.

In battle, the boy takes a supportive roll, using the tricks of his eyes and his ability to give support through his Medical techniques he prefers to stay in the distance and watch and observe, awaiting proper time for his own entrance to the battle. His body given the disease of the Onigami he is weak when it comes to hand to hand combat but far stronger in the sense of Genjutsu and Chakra control. His teammates would be thankful to this so long as they are capable of doing the real fighting and allowing Arael to call the shots from a distance, a leader born to follow so to speak. Along with battle his job as a Shinobi means putting his Sound Village first, he takes pride in their heritage and promised many that he would help the Sound Village become great no matter what it took, even if it meant his own life.

Around people, he will normally withdraw into a book or his own flute, remaining to himself unless approached. Seen as shy it’s really more of his lack of care to make a first move, he’s an observant type who likes to keep to himself, the less information shared the less risks taken. Once obtaining friendships and bonds with Arael you have obtained a rare chance to get to know the boy, and his promise that he will protect you with his own abilities, willing to die for his strong bonds. Teammates hold an equal bond of life and death with him, but he will not share his past or family secrets with them, he will merely aid them and be willing to give his life for theirs. When he speaks he uses and elegant tone, that is to match his attitude in the everyday life, he prefers to live the life of a musician and a writer, an artist down the deepest part of his soul.


General Appearance

Basic looks: Elegant is a word chosen to describe this boy up and down, within his persona and his history, it also pops up in numerous conversations about his appearance. Because of his title Vision of God, he prefers to keep an attractive appearance as if the finest qualities from God were gifted to him. But of course with any great gift there comes a curse, his eyes and chakra cost him with a frail body. His body has muscle upon it, but it isn’t impressive, with very little toning to go with it, he more prides himself around his pale skin that of the mythic Elvin creatures. His long flowing black hair, dark as night stands out further with his pale luminescent skin tone. His facial features are rather sculpted to go along with the Gift of God idea; his yellowish golden eyes stand out around his black bangs and pale skin. The Eyes of a God truly shine through the darkest of times some say.

With his body being elegant he keeps a stylish set up within clothing and accessories, seeming to care as much about his looks as the classic female stereotype. But when you don’t have the muscles of a hearty warrior you must make up with a more suave appearance to fit your persona. He wears at first a long sleeved black button up dress shirt that he leaves more open around the neck and has the collar popped up. Over that a well kept white leather jacket, that he wears much like his dress shirt, there’s a golden trim making the jacket much more valuable. He wears black dress like pants that are always kept well pressed and cleaned; his socks a black with also black dress boots that have been specially made to assist him in battle yet appear rather expensive and sophisticated. He wears a black leather belt with a rather extravagant golden cross belt buckle that is themed along his body.

Because of his frail body he carries little to no physical blemishes, this is because he avoids hand to hand combat. One of the most recognizable features on him other then his natural body state is that of the large black Cross tattoo that runs the length of his spine. He received that after his meeting with Ichijin, it was time he would begin to idolize the God that seemed to have gifted him with such wondrous vision. The Tattoo in itself isn’t a simple blan cross but an elegant running of lines and black in. Within the design the Cross is gifted with symbolic wings and a series of black skulls at the bottom to show that when one steps to a God, an answer is often returned. On the Cross several designs from the “Celtic” belief are made along it, creating a sense of Eternity, showing the Immortality that a God would hold.

As for equipment he tends to keep most of it packed together in one spot to avoid cluttering and confusion, his body and appearance flows like a painting, instead of confusing the natural path of the eye his pouch runs perfectly with it. Upon his forehead he dawns the metal forehead protector gifted to him upon the day he graduated from the Academy within the Sound Village and was deemed a Gennin of Oto. Keeping his body, his clothing, and his equipment well groomed to pull of an attractive appearance of elegance and sophistication, allowing him to be proud of his name, “Vision of God,”
Commonly Attire: With his body being elegant he keeps a stylish set up within clothing and accessories, seeming to care as much about his looks as the classic female stereotype. But when you don’t have the muscles of a hearty warrior you must make up with a more suave appearance to fit your persona. He wears at first a long sleeved black button up dress shirt that he leaves more open around the neck and has the collar popped up. Over that a well kept white leather jacket, that he wears much like his dress shirt, there’s a golden trim making the jacket much more valuable. He wears black dress like pants that are always kept well pressed and cleaned; his socks a black with also black dress boots that have been specially made to assist him in battle yet appear rather expensive and sophisticated. He wears a black leather belt with a rather extravagant golden cross belt buckle that is themed along his body.

Because of his frail body he carries little to no physical blemishes, this is because he avoids hand to hand combat. One of the most recognizable features on him other then his natural body state is that of the large black Cross tattoo that runs the length of his spine. He received that after his meeting with Ichijin, it was time he would begin to idolize the God that seemed to have gifted him with such wondrous vision. The Tattoo in itself isn’t a simple blan cross but an elegant running of lines and black in. Within the design the Cross is gifted with symbolic wings and a series of black skulls at the bottom to show that when one steps to a God, an answer is often returned. On the Cross several designs from the “Celtic” belief are made along it, creating a sense of Eternity, showing the Immortality that a God would hold.
Extra Features: /n/a/


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai: Yasha Mateka Gensou (Demonic Flute Illusions)
-Description: This is another form of what handseals may or may not be. This is needed in order to mold one's chakra and to mold the sound waves in order to be capable of creating a Genjutsu or Ninjutsu out of their flute to cause and create damage towards those all around. This is the stepping stone for all who wish to use the Mateki effectively.

A technique that must be learned multiple times. As stated within the effects this is just a way for the user to play the flute to where they are capable of understanding the techniques of the flute. This is in a sense to be considered as "Handseals" for the flute. When the user learns this technique once, then they are capable of performing Mateki techniques "D", and "C" Rank. The second time learned they are capable of performing "B" Rank Techniques. This continues until they reach to the grand "S" Rank of techniques. At all times this will be known as a "C" Rank type of technique.

-Physical Traits: /n/a/

-Ability Overview: Demonic Flute Jutsu (Can be commonly referenced to Tayuya of Orochimaru's former Elite Sound Four.)


Rank and Skill Information

Village: Sound Village ~> Konohagakure
Title: Chuunin
Letter Rank: C
Group Affiliation: Otogakure Ninja

Specialties:
-Primary: Genjutsu
-Secondary: Ninjutsu

Character Classes:
-1. -
-2. -
-3. -

Elemental Affinity
- Primary Element: -
- Secondary Element -
- Advanced Element -
- Combination Sound Release (KKG)


Jutsu

Code:
[b]Name[/b]: Recognition
[b]Rank[/b]: C
[b]Type:[/b]: Ninjutsu
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan
[b]Description[/b]: The user can identify if they are or not under a genjutsu and break it by expanding their chakra.The user is now capable not only to expand their own chakra by using the bloodlimit's skills, but this time they are capable to "feel" what's around them by using said chakra. This is used to identify a disrupt of chakra around them, in other words, Genjutsu. By identifying the Genjutsu around them the user is capable to break it the same way they identified the Genjutsu, this means that the Genjutsu breaks at the very moment the user notices it. The "D" version only works with "E" Genjutsus, the "C" with "D" or lower and so on.

Code:
[b]Name[/b] Mateki: Merodei Narejji (Demonic Flute: Melody Knowledge)
[b]Rank[/b]: C
[b]Type:[/b]: Ninjutsu
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan
[b]Description[/b]: This is another form of what handseals may or may not be. This is needed in order to mold one's chakra and to mold the sound waves in order to be capable of creating a Genjutsu or Ninjutsu out of their flute to cause and create damage towards those all around. This is the stepping stone for all who wish to use the Mateki effectively.

A technique that must be learned multiple times. As stated within the effects this is just a way for the user to play the flute to where they are capable of understanding the techniques of the flute. This is in a sense to be considered as "Handseals" for the flute. When the user learns this technique once, then they are capable of performing Mateki techniques "D", and "C" Rank. The second time learned they are capable of performing "B" Rank Techniques. This continues until they reach to the grand "S" Rank of techniques. At all times this will be known as a "C" Rank type of technique.

Code:
[b]Name[/b]: Kaichou (Melody)
[b]Rank[/b]: C
[b]Type:[/b]: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan
[b]Description[/b]: Allows the user to attach a specific handseal formation onto a specific note so that they user may play or sing the note in order to gain the effect of performing the handseal. The user is required to sing or hold the instrument's note for a certain amount of time before the effect of the handseal formation can be considered performed. These must be learned each time for each individual Release. This means that if a user wishes to learn this for the Fire Release, they must have the Fire Release and learn this for the Fire Release. If a user has the Figment Perception the user must learn this for the Figment Perception, and have the Fighment Perception. Must be learned for every type of instrument. This makes it where a user can not go into a Guitar, and automatically be capable of doing the same with a Flute.

By first learning how to mold chakra with the use of handseals, a shinobi who focuses upon sound-based techniques can train themselves to achieve this same effect by playing or singing a note for a specific amount of time. Each note has its own handseal significance, and the user must learn how to attach significance to each note before the note can be used in place of handseals. At "C" Rank, the user must hold the note for the length of performing three normal handseals before a note handseal is considered formed. At "B" rank, the user must hold the note for for the length of performing two normal handseals before a note handseal is considered formed. At "A" rank, the user is capable of performing a staccato rhythm, barely holding the note for the length of one normal handseal before having the note handseal formation considered complete. This means that each note consists of a Handseal.

Code:
[b]Name[/b]: Uruwashii Onpu (Beautiful Notes)
[b]Rank[/b]: D
[b]Type:[/b]: Ninjutsu, Supplementary
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan
[b]Description[/b]:Allows the user to attach handseal significance to a certain note, so that they are capable of using it with Kaichou.
Special: Must be using Kaichou.This technique is the building block for the Kaichou technique. By learning how to mold their chakra in a specific way, the use can sing or hold a note in order to release their chakra in a manner that allows them to perform techniques with it.

 C Major --- Rat
 D Flat Major --- Dragon
 D Major --- Boar
 E Flat Major --- Rooster
 E Major --- Rabbit
 F Major --- Snake
 G Flat Major --- Dog
 G Major --- Tiger
 A Flat Major --- Horse
 A Major --- Monkey
 B Flat Major --- Ox
 B Major --- Ram

Code:
[b]Name[/b]: Oto Anpurifaia (Sound Amplifier)
[b]Rank[/b]: D/C
[b]Type:[/b]: Ninjutsu
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan, Sound Release
[b]Description[/b]: Allows the user to increase the range of their songs and or voice. In order to increase the effectiveness and range of their songs, some flutist have learned how to literally create a buffer around them which increases the potency of sound traveling outward. The user will begin by emitting a thick layer of chakra around them, which will expand around them in a dome-like formation. From here, whatever sound they make will flow through the buffer and increase according to how much chakra is within the buffer (in other words, the learned rank of the technique); this means that within the buffer the sound is normal, however once entering it and exiting it takes a tremendous leap.

 D: Ten additional meters.
 C: Twenty additional meters.
 B: Forty additional meters.
 A: Seventy additional meters.
 S: One-hundred additional meters.

Code:
[b]Name[/b]: Mateki: Makyo no Ran (Demonic Flute: War of Evil Men)
[b]Rank[/b]: C
[b]Type:[/b]: Genjutsu
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan
[b]Description[/b]: A technique that brings those that hear into a deep trance, the trance takes them into a world of different proportion. One who feels they know this very world would be brought forth in a world where great tortures may occur. By how one plays the Mateki, they are capable of mixing and messing with the very senses of the brain such as sight, smell, and touch, creating a figment by using sounds, and a harsh like melody. This jutsu stays active as long as the flutist continues playing. (NOTE: This cannot kill the enemy, only cause very minor wounds!)

Code:
[b]Name[/b]: Mateki: Aiirenai, Enzaihebun (Demonic Flute: Harmony, False Heaven)
[b]Rank[/b]: C
[b]Type:[/b]: Genjutsu
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan
[b]Description[/b]: Lulls victims into an illusion of their deepest fantasy, paralyzing them. The user begins to play their instrument, utilizing a series of soft, long notes which will entrance those that can hear its lull. Targets will be captured in an illusion that creates an alternate world, where the users greatest desires at the moment are used to build a scenario that they play out in their mind. However, in the real world, they are paralyzed, doomed to remain so until the jutsu ends. This jutsu stays active as long as the flutist continues playing. There is only one known way to escape the illusion, which is to disrupt the flow of the enemies chakra by screaming incredibly loud, to formidably "override" the sound of the melody.

Code:
[b]Name[/b]: Amatsugi Kowaku no Jutsu (Art of the Heavenly Seduction Stage)
[b]Rank[/b]: C
[b]Type:[/b]: Genjutsu
[b]Element[/b]: -
[b]Requirements[/b]: Medium-Level Chakra Mastery, Yasha Mateka Gensou Clan
[b]Description[/b]: Causes the opponent to become "starry-eyed", as the world around the user becomes a multi-colored background and beautiful stars float around the user. Any hostile action will cause the technique to fail, the beauty of the moment ruined by the use of violence.

A classic anime moment is the female attempt of seduction. This technique, when performed, creates a situation where the opponent cannot seemingly look away from the user. Behind the user, the background fades into the different shades of the rainbow, and specks of light that are seemingly similar to stars will rise up and float around the user. While this technique is in effect, almost every action taken by the user will seem infinitely more attractive. This technique can be enhanced when used in combination with Kouyou Munaita no Jutsu. The effect lasts for three turns or until the user or the opponent dispels the technique. This works on both males and females, regardless of the users gender. (This does not mean the male is homosexual XD)


History/Rp Sample

Rp Sample: ...I just might start going to a church now, he thought. His head was still swimming, almost dizzy from the recent events. He wanted to go back and help her, surely she would need it, but he could not miss his last chance at escape; his unbelievable luck had probably run dry this time. The warp drive deactivated and the massive stargate appeared. Without hesitating, he jumped. Warped to the next one. Jumped again. Over and over until I’m safe. Through Flari, through Agordon, through Jemp, through Tomisaris. He finally arrived at a gate leading to secure space. Never before have I been so eager to be swallowed by a wormhole. A brief moment of total darkness, and the heavens appeared all around him. He looked at the stars and breathed a sigh of relief when he saw a CONCORD ship slowly lumber in the distance. “I need a new job...” Khis said to himself. “Maybe I’ll give a shot at the other side of the law...”
She chuckled when the first one blew up; it was almost too easy. She laughed when the next one popped; a bit of a challenge, but she’d seen worse. But before she could finish the third, two more showed up; ships that were bigger than the first three. Not fuckin’ fair! They threw E-war drones her way; her guns now wouldn’t keep up with the sharp orbits. She was triple-webbed. But my tank is holding for now, that’s all that matters. Then four more ships showed up, and Schaa’s heart sank. She saw how the battle would unfold even before it happened. Antimatter charges plowed into her ship from all sides. Within 30 seconds, it had dissipated entirely. Then the entire structure shivered as chunks of armor were blown away. She knew she had already lost. But when she had 30% hull, the guns stopped firing. She knew was that meant immediately. “These fuckers are gonna ransom ME?” Her Comm. Unit bleeped. “How much, assholes?”
“How about Khis’s head. On a platter.” She paused. Fuck. FUCK!
“It’s been a long time, Eilyin.”
“Almost too long Schaa. I just wanted to say hi, and ask why the hell you attacked my boys?”
“They were bullying my friend.”
“Since when did start sticking up for the little guys? Or have friends? If there is one thing you should have learned, it’s to not fuck with my business.”
“The debt was nothing, Eilyin. You probably spent that much hunting him down.”
“Debts are always paid, or people die. No exceptions are made, Schaa, and not only did you help him get away, you killed some of my favorite hunters.”
She knew he was boiling with rage inside, but his voice didn’t show a trace of emotion. He continued, “You should be smarter than that, Schaa. I thought your people knew the limits; where your hunting ground ends and my control begins. You fucked with my business, Schaa. Now you’re gonna die.”
An interdictor warped in, and she gasped. That can only mean one thing. As the mercs resumed tearing through her ship, a disruption sphere was fired. “You think podding me is gonna teach me a lesson? You think I’m afraid to die? Go to hell!”
“I have better things planned for you. Bitch.”
Her ship burst violently and the pod immediately rocketed away from the sphere as fast as possible, but she knew it was just too late. A few seconds later, she was webbed, and she knew it was the end. The end for this lifetime, anyway. Another Schaa will be soon born back at the station. It’s happened before, I don’t mind dying again. She closed her eyes and waited. Waited for what seemed like an eternity. But no guns fired, and she noticed she was moving again. It took her just a second to realize what was happening. “No! NO! NOOOO!!” Her fate was sealed; a fate worse than death. She knew what Eilyin did with his catches... Her pod was sucked inside a cargo bay. The bubble deactivated and the mercenaries charted a course for Eiylin’s base.

History: Born as an average child, nothing truly special about this boy other then his frail body. He would be raised by regular citizens in the Land of Water. His father a business man, and his mother a stay at home mom. It would be considered odd that a boy that became so great would come from such an average beginning. Because of his bland beginning he was originally named Haseo Rokusho. As he was beginning to grow he would learn the basics of life as a regular citizen, seeing no reason to enroll such a frail body into an Academy for Shinobi his parents thought it best to teach him business skills for life. So he would grow learning the art of Capitalism and the ways that it truly controlled and manipulated the lives of the shinobi growing up around him. Soon enough though this bland life would take a magical twist of color that would sprout him out of the Technicolor lifestyle he was being raised in.

That sprout in color would come around the age of nine when his eyes became active, the chakra would explode within his body from under use. Overwhelmed originally by this site change he would fade back into an unconscious state being rushed to a hospital quickly. Medical Shinobi of the highest quality were unaware what would cause such issues with his vision, but they were gaining readings of unremarkable amounts of chakra flowing through the young child’s body. Finally the Mizukage herself would arrive to take a look at the miracle child, the one of a thousand shinobi’s chakra. She couldn’t believe what readings she was being told and asked his parents as to why he wasn’t enrolled currently in the academy. They said because this chakra never existed before, it sprouted out of a sudden occurrence. With rumors sprouting and taking root, the boy would return from his comatose state. Unable to hold a strong sense of vision he would randomly lose it when his chakra would explode. His explanations to an old retired medic would bring up to the conclusion of the Folklore of the Onigami Clan and their amazing eyes of God. Because of the constant loss of control he would begin to lose memories, and needed to start a new. His father would rename him Arael Rokusho.

Soon enough his parents would be killed by an older group of retired shinobi from the days back when the onigami had to go into hiding when the Shinobi hunted the bloodlimits attempting to rid the impurities of the world. Using his vision he would see such an outcome coming, and would alert them. As a sign of good health they would hold the attackers off with enough time for their child to flee for his life. Martyrs that would set the stage for a great Martyr to be raised within a new land. Areal the Vision of God was given another chance at life, a themed reasoning behind his blood. So his travels would begin.

As he reached his teenage years he had been traveling quite some time around this world of Shinobi. Coming to understand his family further during this time; not the ones whom died but should be honored as Onigami, but the blood that he has running through his veins. As he traveled he searched for information on the folklore of the Onigami in hopes to find some information the abilities that he had. It would take several years before he got any reall solid information put together. Arriving in the Village of Sound he would hope to harbor a new home here, learning more about chakra and the control of it, he would enter the academy, keeping his information and techniques a secret from the kids, the teachers and the Shinobi whom took him in. He would spend late nights training into the arts of Genjutsu and Medicine, and the late afternoons reading and gathering a real solid idea of what he could do. Setting up the idea of a code that was gathered from old stories and urban legends that he took down on paper. He was writing the book on Onigami, slowly but surely he would come to understand what he truly was, and that was a Gift from God.

Soon enough he would be awarded the title of Gennin and honored the headband of Oto. He requested time to travel and learn more about some myths he had been studying attempting to keep his secrets just that. It would be granted at the price that he must serve loyally to Oto and return to do some serious shinobi work. He accepted charges and headed south towards the Land of Fire. It was here where he would run into a Chuunin, the boy known as Ichijin. A hyuuga of true power and speed, known as the Wind himself, elusive and powerful Ichijin showed to respect for those around him that deserved it. Over Arael’s time of studying bloodlines he lost hope within the Uchiha and their sharingan, over confident and arrogant, no honor would lay in such a lifestyle. Now the Hyuuga often took the same path, but this meeting with Ichijin would open the eyes of the Onigami known as Arael. Within a quick weeks interaction and study he would begin to gain true knowledge of the byakugan and it’s limits, in a way surpassing that of the Onigami’s eyes. Each had its benefits and the blood each came with a curse. As they parted, Arael would make a promise to Ichijin that they would meet once more in their lives, both far more advanced than they were the day they first encountered one another. That day a true understanding of one anothers ability would be feasible. Three more years of studying and training would pass and the boy of the Onigami would soon be able to call himself a man. The Vision of God was progressing greatly in his path towards greatness…


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PostSubject: Re: Arael Rokusho   Wed Sep 29, 2010 6:30 pm

Meh'. This app is too difficult for my brain to comprehend. xD

I'd leave this app in the hands of Zodiark or an admin.
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PostSubject: Re: Arael Rokusho   Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:45 pm

Wow if you have problems with this thats just sad...
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PostSubject: Re: Arael Rokusho   Thu Sep 30, 2010 3:08 am

Okay fix all your Ninjutsu (Besides Oto Anpurifaia) because they speak of a song and learning faster and all but it doesn't say what the song does or anything. So please add that into them all put EXACTLY What each of these said songs does.

Mateki: Makyo no Ran - Okay how long does it stay active, do you have to keep playing the note for it to stay in play. How to break out of it like can the person use his chakra to get out... Also is it capable of killing people like Tasukayomi (Spelled it wrong I bet) does... Please add these things.

Aiirenai, Enzaihebun - Again how long does it stay active, do you have to keep playing the note for it to stay in play. How to break out of it like can the person use his chakra to get out...

Amatsugi Kowaku no Jutsu - Nothing wrong with this but I have to ask. Does this work on Straight guys and Homosexual Females,,, Cuase I have a feeling it be pointless to use on a guy but please explain to me.

I know I'm not a mod (Though I was Admin/Mods on many other strict sites.)
but hey your not doing shit about the app so why not help, so they can rp as well.

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PostSubject: Re: Arael Rokusho   Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:18 am

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PostSubject: Re: Arael Rokusho   Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:23 pm

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