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 Kisho Kimura [Finished]

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PostSubject: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sat Aug 21, 2010 1:28 am

Basic Info

Name: Kimura, Kisho

Nickname/Alias: Zodiark

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Important Family Members: N/A

Personality:
Kisho comes off and a normally relaxed person, taking the easiest solution possible to get out of any situation. Even though he is normally calm, at times he can be quick to anger. As an opponent, Kisho is a rather sadistic fighter, preferring to toy with his opponents, making them suffer. As a child he feared his bloodline would cause others to think of him as a monster, causing him to grow as a more introverted person, keeping to himself and only focusing on his goals and well being.


General Appearance

Basic looks
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Kisho's hair tends to fall forward and cover the upper half of his face, shielding his peircing blue eyes from the world. He appears to be a teenager of average build, but under his clothes is a muscular body, showing years of dedication to physical perfection. In contrast to the dark colors he wears, Kisho's pure silver hair stands out as a focal point, drawing other's eyes to try and meet his gaze, only to be blocked by his bangs.

Height: 5" 7'

Weight: 130

Preferred Wardrobe: Kisho wears a long flowing crimson jacket, with the shoulders and inside a darker shade. The sleeves are rolled up just above the elbow. Underneath the jacket he wears a black long sleeved shirt, rolled up just enough to show his forearms, and on top of that he wears a black vest with three buckles, two across his stomach, with the third across his upper chest. He wears long black pants, that cover the upper part of a pair of black combat boots.

Extra Features: N/A


Bloodline Information

Kekkei Genkai: Branch of Sin

Description: Allows the manipulation of the clan members blood.

Physical Traits Increased blood supply from an average of 5 liters, to nearly 8 liters Allowing for 3.2 liters of blood to be lost instead of 2.4 before passing out. All members of the clan that show this KKG have a from of hemophilia that completely prevents the clotting of blood.

Ability Overview The user is able to manipulate and solidify their blood through cuts into various weapons for combat. Use of this skill can be used to counteract the affects of hemophilia by preventing the bleeding of a wound. These weapons can be whatever the user wishes, from blades, whips, projectiles, etc. While these jutsu require blood, not all blood used is lost. The user is able to recover most blood used back into their body, yet if fired as a weapon, or a jutsu is broken by an opponent, the blood becomes unsalvageable. Through dedicated training, some members have been able to transform their blood to have an almost posion like quality, producing a wide array of effects on opponents. Some clan member have taken to filling camelback like apparatus with a reserve of their blood. This supply provides a safer alternative than self-mutilation.


Rank and Skill Information

Village: Kirigakure

Rank: Genin
Letter Rank C
Group affiliation N/A

Specialties:

- Main: Taijutsu
-Sub:
-Combination

Advanced/Secondary Skills:


Elemental & Jutsu Information

Elemental Affinity

Primary Element Raiton
Secondary Element N/A
Advanced Element N/A
Combination N/A

Jutsu (If they All don't fit, put in another post)

All Academy Jutsu

Name: Crow's Claws
Rank: C
Classification: KKG
Element: N/A
Requirements: .5 liters of blood per blade
Description: Through cuts on the forearm, the user creates solid scythe like blades protruding on outwards. These blades are 2.5 feet in length, and half a foot wide where it connects to the skin. A full swing while running is able to slice through nearly half an inch of steel, while s standing strike is enough to slice through the flesh and bone. This jutsu can be broken with sufficient force to the flat of the blade, and if broken, the blood used become irretrievable, causing a loss of blood. If the user wishes, they can end the jutsu themselves, salvaging, and preventing any loss of blood.

Name: Blood Bullet
Rank: D
Classification: KKG
Element: N/A
Requirements: .1 liters of blood per shot
Description: By forming a small amount of in the palm of the hand, The user uses chakra to fire the blood like a bullet. This bullet is able to penetrate up to 2 inches into a human body, but when faced with something solid such as rock or metal, the blood fails to make a dent, leaving nothing more than blood splatter. Any blood used for this jutsu is lost.

Name: Konoha Senpū
Rank: C
Classification: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Requirements:
Description: This jutsu is a set-up attack for a stronger jutsu. It consists of a simple, but very fast, duck followed by a powerful upward kick, which sends the opponent flying

Name: Shukuchi - Reduced Earth
Rank: C
Classification: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Requirements:
Description: : Using his speed, Zodiark becomes momentarily invisible to the naked eye, moving faster than the opponents brain can process, as he closes the gap between him and his target. Using this jutsu, Zodiark is able to cover at most 10m in a fraction of a second.

Name: Lightning Fist
Rank: C
Classification: Nintaijutsu
Element: Raiton
Requirements:
Description: The user creates positive and negative charges in his fist and collides them, creating lightning, it has a stun effect, the effectiveness depends on the user's skill which can produce either a current that stuns the opponent for a long duration of time or a current that lasts only for very short time. This also depends on who the opponent is because if they are powerful enough, dispersing the effect with their own chakra would be quite easy.

Name: Fist of Reverse Lightning
Rank: C
Classification: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Requirements: Mastery of Lightning Fist
Description: It works by only creating a negative charge while using the enemie's natural positive charge to create a lightning effect that stuns the enemy, while it also disrupts the flow of chakra in the body of the enemy, preventing them from using justu for 2 posts.


History/Rp Sample


Rp Sample: No

History:
Kisho was brought to the Mist as a small child. His parents were ninja of a village that had been destroyed by war. With a new begining, they had hoped to hide their unique KKG from the village, and to lead a normal life. As Kisho grew, he eventually became enthralled in the idea of becoming a ninja. His parents having lived that life, thought it was only natural, and enrolled him into the academy. As a student, Kisho was hard working and diligent. While he was never the head of his class, he was always an above average student. Shortly after his graduation from the academy, Kisho and his genin team were sent on a mission. It was a small mission, track down a small time thief that had been robbing houses in the area. While out chasing him down, Kisho was slipped up, falling and slicing his arm. He told his team to go on without him. As he sat there, looking at his wound, it just wouldn't stop bleeding. Holding his arm, he kept repeating in his head Stop bleeding. While he new it wouldn't work, he still sat there repeating it. But to his surprise, the blood stopped flowing, despite the lack of a scab. When he returned home, Kisho questioned his parents. Much to their displeasure, they told him about his family's secret. Learning the truth, he thought himself a monster. Fearing that he would be shunned, Kisho hid is abilities from everyone, rarely using them.



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PostSubject: Re: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sun Aug 22, 2010 2:41 pm

Finished, and waiting for approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sun Aug 22, 2010 3:14 pm

You're going to give somebody aids with that blood bullet thing... I can see it coming.

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• Name: Lightning Fist
• Rank: C
• Classification: Nintaijutsu
• Element: Raiton
• Requirements:
• Description: The user creates positive and negative charges in his fist and collides them, creating lightning, it has a stun effect, the effectiveness depends on the user's skill which can produce either a current that stuns the opponent for a long duration of time or a current that lasts only for very short time. This also depends on who the opponent is because if they are powerful enough, dispersing the effect with their own chakra would be quite easy.

I assumed the Reverse Lightning Fist was used with contact, but the regular one's unclear. Do you need to connect with both fists against the enemy? Or does it create more of a small shockwave type deal when you connect your two fists together?

The only other thing I can thing of is that your KKG seems a little weak, you may want to add an ability that holds blood within your system. Otherwise, if cut somewhere that isn't defined to be an area you can use your two techniques from... your dead. That's just a personal opinion though.

Other then that, this will be Approved after that one clarification.

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PostSubject: Re: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:02 pm

For the lightning fist, i basically create lightning in my fist, than punch my opponent.

As for my KKG, if i get cut, i can use the KKG itself to keep the myself from bleeding, as of it seeming weak, i have plans and stronger techniques for it, they just can't be used by a genin. And i put the hemophilia so that the blood could be stored in something like a camelback, for use anytime.
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PostSubject: Re: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:45 pm

The fact that you can use the KKG to stop your bleeding needs to be added to it. That's all my point really is.

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PostSubject: Re: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:54 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:18 pm

Perfect.

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PostSubject: Re: Kisho Kimura [Finished]    Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:11 pm

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